The following appeared as part of the Dean’s newsletter:
"The University of Wabash is considering a community service requirement for all undergraduate and graduate students. We believe that the objective of any university is to produce well-rounded and charitable members of society. The proposed graduation requirement would be to complete at least 8 hours of unpaid community service per month for a total of 9 months. The Dean’s office will maintain a list of approved local charities on its website with contact information. This is a fantastic opportunity for students to give back to the community and gain real-world working experience. Most importantly, local charities in need will receive the help that they need to continue their efforts."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Supporting the community with volunteering and financial support is an important part of sustainability goals. But, in my opinion, unpaid community service can't work in form of "must do" requirements and students should have right to take decisions by them own.
Volunteering trend is developing over the years. People around the world learn more about community's needs and importance to help the others. Corporate giants in cooperation with countries athorities launch big investment campaignes to provide the necessary help to less protected community groups. They prove the sence of true volunteering is always an altruistic activity. So the proposed graduation requirement of completing at least 8 hours of unpaid community service is forcing students to work.
It is obvious that forced activity doesn't bring the great results. Personal engagement and contribution are considered as the most effective ways to do the business. That is why such initiative can be accepted either negetively and can lead to time and human resources wasting.
I believe that initiative is honorable activity and shoud be implemented in the University, but the requirements should be changed. We can help the community by educating people, building the inside desire to help, but not by forcing them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...in my opinion, unpaid community service cant work in form of 'must do' req...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, at least, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 2260.96107784 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 441.139720559 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.505 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0591502088 2.78398813304 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.468620217663 143% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 705.55239521 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4841841859 57.8364921388 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.75 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.324526521 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.70786347227 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125596568183 0.218282227539 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388428546027 0.0743258471296 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378390068597 0.0701772020484 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718441984608 0.128457276422 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362359994046 0.0628817314937 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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