The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night programs has devoted time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late night program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenue, we should restore time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
In a memorandum from the business manager off a television station it is asserted that over the past year their late-night show has devoted more time to national news than the weather and local news. However, during this time they received many complaints from viewers which were regarding the coverage of weather and local news. Additionally, the local businesses that used to advertise during late-night news program have canceled their advertising contract with them. So, to attract more viewers to their program and avoid any further lose of their advertising revenues they are going to reschedule the time for weather and local news which was prior to the change. Perhaps, this argument ultimately fails as it suffers from several critical fallacies and is weak and unconvincing.
Firstly, the arguer have asserted that the televison station have telecasted national news for more time than the weather and local news and during this period of time they received complaints from viewers. However, the arguer provided no evidence that why the complaints were being lodged by the viewer. It might have happened that as the television station gave more time to national news the viewers were not happy with it and wanted them to showcast local news and weather conditions. Moreover, the reason of complaint might be that the coverage might have problem and would be telecasting the same news quite a lot of time. Other reason that might have led the viewer to complain is that few people must have liked the show and use to watch the news program to get acquainted with the things happening around and would check the weather forecast their. While other people who would like to see the national news are happy with the change but could have problems with the unnecessary news being shown than the various important things taking place.
Nevertheless, the arguer has also asserted that the local businesses have also abrogated their advertising contracts but has provided no convincing reason for that cancellation. Perhaps, it could have happen that the local businesses are failing and don't have enough revenues left with them to afford for advertising contracts. Additionally, the reason for cancellation might be due to the failure of the television station with proper advertisement or might be that the station gives less number of advertisement and is costly. Moreover, the reason could be that people have complains regarding this station and are no more interested in it. However, the business manager have asserted that in order to attract more viewers which they might hav e lost they are restoring the time devoted to local and weather news to it former level . So, that they don't lose their advertising revenues further and are back in business. But, eventually the argument could be bolstered by arguer by providing evidence and convincing the reader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... weather and local news and during this period of time they received complaints from viewers. ...
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Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...few people must have liked the show and use to watch the news program to get acquai...
^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...at cancellation. Perhaps, it could have happen that the local businesses are failing a...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...at the local businesses are failing and dont have enough revenues left with them to ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 834, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ocal and weather news to it former level . So, that they dont lose their advertisi...
^^
Line 5, column 851, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...news to it former level . So, that they dont lose their advertising revenues further...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235059760956 0.25644967241 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.189243027888 0.15541462614 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0876494023904 0.0836205057962 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478087649402 0.0520304965353 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0458167330677 0.0272364105082 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103585657371 0.125424944231 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0637450199203 0.0416121511921 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57812246419 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338645418327 0.026700313972 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101593625498 0.113004496875 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298804780876 0.0255425247493 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159362549801 0.0127820249294 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2873.0 2731.13054187 105% => OK
No of words: 471.0 446.07635468 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09978768577 6.12365571057 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.57801047555 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343949044586 0.378187486979 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276008492569 0.287650121315 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195329087049 0.208842608468 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114649681529 0.135150697306 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57812246419 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 207.018472906 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.3991507431 0.469332199767 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.2535169982 52.1807786196 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 26.1666666667 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7431678173 57.7814097925 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.611111111 141.986410481 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.724660767414 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.14285714286 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 3.58251231527 167% => OK
Readability: 53.7675159236 51.9672348444 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.42253521127 1.8405768891 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.580359243097 0.441005458295 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156922868159 0.135418324435 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0731171503935 0.0829849096947 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567813924971 0.58762219726 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12290221465 0.147661913831 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267717654356 0.193483328276 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140362898838 0.0970749176394 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.63512652705 0.42659136922 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0207954183738 0.0774707102158 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.495518058281 0.312017818177 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986322179154 0.0698173142475 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.87684729064 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 5.36822660099 224% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 14.657635468 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.