"The following was used as part of an internet advertising company's appeal to businesses: Furniture Depot employed our internet advertising company to help. Since then its sales increased by 10% over last year's totals. Furniture Depot's success demonstrates how using our internet services can increase your profitability. "
Describe how well reasoned you find this argument. In the discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the argument's conclusion. You may also address possible changes in the argument that would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.
The appeal made by an internet advertising company seems to be a great deal at first glance but there are numerous flaws behind the appeal,rendering its conclusion and mentioning that profitability of others is solely depends on Furniture Depot success ,invalid.
First of all how could a company's success relates to others.There is lack of evidence that can determine how one company can help elevating the profits of other company .There is no co-relation between that and hence it weakens the stated argument.
Furthermore,there is a high possibility that the Furniture company might use some other means in order to advertise their products.For example: door to door marketing using salesmen,advertisement on television which is one of the vast source of public interest. Therefore,one can not be fully satisfied by the company's appeal to business.
However,the profit figures of the Furniture company increased by 10% over last year's total but we don't know anything about company's previous years turnovers.It may be possible that the company has a different name a year prior and might be very successful also and now it replaced its old name from Furniture Depot which people had no idea about and the company just wanted to make sure that people must be aware of their new name and same variety of products and therefore,people were already aware of it ,hence the company again was able to regain their profits in comparison to a last year's totals,leads to think over internet company's appeal one more time as it lacks evidence regarding this situation.
Overall,the Internet company's appeal is biased towards Furniture Depot profits and don't want to consider any other view point in order to demonstrate how using their internet services will help increasing other's profitability.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28025477707 0.25644967241 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.162420382166 0.15541462614 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0955414012739 0.0836205057962 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0477707006369 0.0520304965353 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0350318471338 0.0272364105082 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0923566878981 0.125424944231 74% => OK
Participles: 0.031847133758 0.0416121511921 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1100859391 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350318471338 0.026700313972 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0891719745223 0.113004496875 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286624203822 0.0255425247493 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191082802548 0.0127820249294 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1791.0 2731.13054187 66% => OK
No of words: 288.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21875 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354166666667 0.378187486979 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284722222222 0.287650121315 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211805555556 0.208842608468 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142361111111 0.135150697306 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1100859391 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 207.018472906 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.469332199767 123% => OK
Word variations: 60.9922275953 52.1807786196 117% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.039408867 30% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.2022227129 207% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 194.346769118 57.7814097925 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.5 141.986410481 210% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 23.2022227129 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 0.724660767414 299% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.58251231527 586% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 76.4722222222 51.9672348444 147% => OK
Elegance: 1.64935064935 1.8405768891 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294668176364 0.441005458295 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173700698211 0.135418324435 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0583217603854 0.0829849096947 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.887075305955 0.58762219726 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195600337241 0.147661913831 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16562273001 0.193483328276 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593532884994 0.0970749176394 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260705925537 0.42659136922 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0427674054386 0.0774707102158 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184537751579 0.312017818177 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506667516338 0.0698173142475 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 14.657635468 41% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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