Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain why.
The main goal for any good government is to make its people happier and try always to create the best situations for them. When people satisfy about their government, the government will gain more power from people and it will be able to take critical decision easier because of its people’s support.To gain that supprot governemt should focus on solving the problems that exist now because it is obviously more significant than trying to solve anticipated future problems.
First of all, the most important factor for government to be able to work and plan for future is the stability in the current situations. When the governments face a lot of problems and all the people frustrate about it, they will not be able to make accurate decisions about the future. In contrast, when a government try to provide a solutions for current problems, the people will stand with that government and support it to go further. We all know that parliament is responsible about to agree or disagree for some decisions and the parliament itself is consisted of different people from different levels, so if the people are not satisfy about the government, It cannot get any financial support to solve anticipated problem.
Furthermore, predicated problems may not happen at all. as you noticed, it is called anticipated so there is a high probability that it will not happen so the question that poses itself: Is it better to focus on current problems and make people feel more relax or to try to find solutions for problems that may not exist at all?. Moreover, if a government ignores the current small problems, there is a high probability for that problems to develop and have more negative effects. We all know that it is better and cheaper to solve the problem in the beginning. For instance; suppose a street suffers from gathering rubbish in it and government has to solve the problem. It is better to order to clean the street earlier or just ignore that and the amount of rubbish increases rapidly and that means illnesses and destroys the beauty of the stree.
Finally, governments should be wise and make a balance between the efforts for solving the future and current problems. As we mention, It is more important to focus on solving current problems but It is better to solve the current problems and prepare solutions for the anticipated future problems. For example, the government can dedicate groups of people for studying people’s problems and find solutions for it, in addition; another group ,in the same time,can work for future problems. The main idea is to be balanced.
In sum, governments should focus to solve current problems because that will create great atmosphere for more work for anticipated problems in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...er because of its people's support.To gain that supprot governemt should focu...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a solution' or simply 'solutions'?
Suggestion: a solution; solutions
...trast, when a government try to provide a solutions for current problems, the people will s...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...ferent levels, so if the people are not satisfy about the government, It cannot get any...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...dicated problems may not happen at all. as you noticed, it is called anticipated s...
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Line 5, column 694, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cleaning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cleaning
...olve the problem. It is better to order to clean the street earlier or just ignore that ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tions for it, in addition; another group ,in the same time,can work for future pro...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , can
...ddition; another group ,in the same time,can work for future problems. The main idea...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203125 0.25644967241 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.173828125 0.15541462614 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08203125 0.0836205057962 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056640625 0.0520304965353 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048828125 0.0272364105082 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115234375 0.125424944231 92% => OK
Participles: 0.021484375 0.0416121511921 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70283197279 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044921875 0.026700313972 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.1015625 0.113004496875 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02734375 0.0255425247493 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01171875 0.0127820249294 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2754.0 2731.13054187 101% => OK
No of words: 463.0 446.07635468 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94816414687 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.57801047555 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369330453564 0.378187486979 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285097192225 0.287650121315 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198704103672 0.208842608468 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136069114471 0.135150697306 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70283197279 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 207.018472906 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399568034557 0.469332199767 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.0624696148 52.1807786196 84% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 27.2352941176 23.2022227129 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.529819962 57.7814097925 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 141.986410481 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2352941176 23.2022227129 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.724660767414 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.58251231527 195% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.7450133401 51.9672348444 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.21678321678 1.8405768891 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464787286442 0.441005458295 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173413596355 0.135418324435 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0837972823933 0.0829849096947 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.640632617947 0.58762219726 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177749529792 0.147661913831 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240552660594 0.193483328276 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761577527929 0.0970749176394 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.545935893438 0.42659136922 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0519822788874 0.0774707102158 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347526994608 0.312017818177 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446330991456 0.0698173142475 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.33743842365 120% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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