Though this is a good and positive initiative by the international development organization to engineer a new breed of millet high in vitamin A to counter the deficiency of vitamin A among the people in impoverished nation of Tagus.It is important to answer several questions before implementation this idea.
It takes a lot of hard work for farmers to grow grains and several factors come into picture which needs to be attended and examined first. One such factor is weather conditions.It needs to be made sure that the seasonal conditions required for new breed of millet should be same or close in some extent to the previous breed of millet.If not,it will be very difficult for the farmers to understand the seasonal requirements and it may even be possible that seasonal conditions in Tagus are not even suitable for growing this grain.
The time taken to grow the millet also should be the same.If the new breed of millet takes longer time to grow fully then it may cause a huge loss to farmers.This would reduce the grain output to time ratio.
Another factor which plays a major role is the difference in the taste of the new breed of millet.Will the people of Tagus like it and continue to eat the same way as they would have eaten the previous breed.If not then this would not be much of a success.Contrarily if the people like the taste of it and eat excess of it then there might be a problem of excess of Vitamin A in their body which might altogether cause a new issue.
Hence it is important to carefully examine and consider all these factors before coming to a conclusion and making such a huge decision of farming the new variety of millet.
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 50
- An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be p 37
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 305 350
No. of Characters: 1345 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.179 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.41 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.476 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 50.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.621 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.478 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.814 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... people in impoverished nation of Tagus.It is important to answer several question...
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...his idea. It takes a lot of hard work for farmers to grow grains and several f...
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.... One such factor is weather conditions.It needs to be made sure that the seasonal...
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... extent to the previous breed of millet.If not,it will be very difficult for the f...
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...t to the previous breed of millet.If not,it will be very difficult for the farmers ...
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Suggestion: If
...grow the millet also should be the same.If the new breed of millet takes longer ti...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...grow the millet also should be the same.If the new breed of millet takes longer ti...
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...hen it may cause a huge loss to farmers.This would reduce the grain output to time r...
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Suggestion: Will
...in the taste of the new breed of millet.Will the people of Tagus like it and continu...
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Suggestion: If
...hey would have eaten the previous breed.If not then this would not be much of a su...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hey would have eaten the previous breed.If not then this would not be much of a su...
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...hen this would not be much of a success.Contrarily if the people like the taste of it and ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... might altogether cause a new issue. Hence it is important to carefully examine an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 296.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64189189189 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70719221713 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.8473053892 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.82321653 57.8364921388 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 229.0 119.503703932 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 23.324526521 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.70786347227 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383032422618 0.218282227539 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184912124918 0.0743258471296 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124881493817 0.0701772020484 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207266486948 0.128457276422 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122710293394 0.0628817314937 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.3799401198 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.3550499002 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.197005988 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 12.3882235529 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.1389221557 194% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.9071856287 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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