The issue here in question is ,do people who make their decisions on the basis of their emotions and try to justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
To answer this question firstly we need to understand how different kinds of people make their decisions based on the given situation.Most of the people tend to make decisions based on the emotion.These people don't estimate the possible outcomes of the decision and often their decision turns out to be poor.Even if they realise their decision was poor, afterwards they tend to think they are correct and try to defend themselves so that they don't make a mockery of themselves in front of others.These people are so strong to justify their decision and sometimes go to extremes to make their point by giving false reasons.
But, on the other side there are people who make their decisions calmly and tactically.They come up with all the possible outcomes of a decision and anticipate , if their decision will turn out to be right or wrong. They can even clearly defend and justify their decision because they have it all mapped into their mind the reasons of their decision and why is it best in the current scenario.
Hence it can be said that the decisions made out of emotions mostly turns out to be poor and the justifications and reasons following it most of the time turn out to be false.Hence, these people often tend to be poor decision makers.On the other hand people who make decisions based on logic and instinct, always turn out ot be better decision makers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79925650558 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60791503897 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449814126394 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.422548676 60.3974514979 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.2 118.986275619 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8 23.4991977007 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.554061380429 0.243740707755 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.375085844055 0.0831039109588 451% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167891165691 0.0758088955206 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.422198029088 0.150359130593 281% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149432690949 0.0667264976115 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 100.480337079 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.8971910112 223% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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