Last October the city of Belleville installed high-intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined within a month. The city of Amburg has recently begun police patrols on bicycles in its business district, but the rate of vandalism there remains constant. We should install high-intensity lighting throughout Amburg, then, because doing so is a more effective way to combat crime. By reducing crime in this way, we can revitalize the declining neighborhoods in our city.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
While it may be true that by installing high intensity lighting in city of amburg, crime will get reduced. this argument doesnot make a cogent case for installing high intensity lighting throughout the city of amburg. but is easy to understand that by installing high intensity lighting, crime will get reduced. but, this argument is rife with holes, and thus, not strong enough support the author's assumption that by installing high intensity lighting vanadalism activity will get reduced. I think that there may be some hidden factors that may claim author's assumption invalid. hence the author's argument is not reliable.
First of all, the argument here readily assume that as city of belleville installed high intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined within a month. The city of amburg should install high intensity lighting throughout amburg and as a result crime will get reduced. this is merely an assumption made without much solid ground. For eg, it may be possible that installing high intensity lighting is only one of the factors and there may be some other factors including high intensity lighting such as recently city of belleville has passed new law that states, if any one found guilty of vandalism, he/she will get harsh punishments or may be life in prison. As a result people are more aware and avoid involving in such activities. it may equally possible that belleville city is already a crime free city` and there may be some other purpose for installing high intensity lighting. However author did not provide more information on from how much percent crime or vandalism activities get reduced. it may be possible that it is only of negligible percent which is actually meaningless. hence the argument would have been more convincing if it explicitely states that whether installing high intensity lighting in only a factor that leads to reduced crime.
Second, the argument here states that by installing high intensity lighting throughout amburg, it will be more effective way to combat crime. this again is a weak and unsupported claim as it doesnot demonstate any clear correlation between high intensity lighting and reduce in vandalism activities. it may be possible that what works for belleville city may not work for amburg city or it may eqaully possible that even by installing high intensity lighting crime is not declining. if the had provided evidence or more information that how high intensity lighting will lead to reduce vandalism activities. Then it would have been a lot more convincing to the reader.
However, careful scrutiny of the evidence reveals that if it provide little credible support for the author's conclusion in several critical respects and raises several skeptical questions. For eg, what is a correlation between high intensity lighting and reduced in crime? what work for city belleville will also definately work for city amburg? what is actual percent decrease in vandalism activities in belleville city? without convincing answers to this question the reader is left with the impression that the claim made by the author are more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence.
In conclusion, the author's argument is unpervasive as it stands. To bolster it further, the author must provide more concrete evidence, perhaps by the detailed analysis of whether by installing high intensity lighting, crime will get reduced it would be necessary to know more infomation about how by installing high intensity lighting, crime will get reduced. hence, the conclusion drawn in the argument cannot regarded as fact until the stated assumption and questions are addressed.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 593 350
No. of Characters: 3038 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.935 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.123 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.671 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 232 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 190 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 143 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 85 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.144 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.929 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.446 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.633 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e more aware and avoid involving in such activities. it may equally possible that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.9520958084 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3133.0 2260.96107784 139% => OK
No of words: 592.0 441.139720559 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29222972973 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72944539595 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 204.123752495 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.386824324324 0.468620217663 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 980.1 705.55239521 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 19.7664670659 142% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4564745544 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.892857143 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.25449101796 514% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 22.0 6.88822355289 319% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281495496075 0.218282227539 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938726818233 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109958340609 0.0701772020484 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172509261553 0.128457276422 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814238661198 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 98.500998004 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.