Humana University sees only the pors side of the Omni University whitout proper investigating its past experience and course details and the management system. Humana University president must perform the statical analysis of the building expenses, dormitory and electricity expenses and whether the Omni University is providing the offline classes. Humana University is lacking some short of exhaustive information and lucidly focusing on the outer surface for adapting the Omni procedure of online service without realizing the upcoming challenges to face while shifting from offline classes to the online classes.
Humana University president must collect the proper data of the total students enrolled in the next year after changing the format of offline to online classes. What if the 50% increament only refers to the 10 students as if the total student is 20. Thus, the proper evaluation of total student must be done carefully to examine the exact increase in the number of student.
Why Omni University is providing the online class; this must be encountered before copying the trend of online classes. Whether the offline classes of Omni University is completely full and the remaining students who are not getting seat on the offline classes are attending the virtual class.
Here, it is pointed that there is slight decrease in the dormitory and the classroom expenses which is not specified clearly. Whether, the slight decrease in the dormitory and classes expenses might result in negligible amount for the Humana University. So, without the proper and exhaustive premise we can’t defunct the offline class and start the online classes as our neighbour did.
Also, the syllabus and the course of the Humana University must be examined and checked properly. The question must be raised that why the students are not choosing humana University. Whether it is due to environment condition, teacher and other related criteria. Thus, the proper investigation and panning must be done to adapt the new trend and analysis should be done whether, we can sustain and challenge the upcoming consequences.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 334 350
No. of Characters: 1748 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.275 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.234 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.654 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.668 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ersity whitout proper investigating its past experience and course details and the management s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rsity is providing the offline classes. Humana University is lacking some short of exh...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ffline classes to the online classes. Humana University president must collect the p...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33832335329 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69729905822 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476047904192 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2987667211 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.70786347227 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194092672384 0.218282227539 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696456352354 0.0743258471296 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439191676724 0.0701772020484 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108972250807 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527976097239 0.0628817314937 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.5979740519 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 12.3882235529 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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