Online programs are becoming quite popular these days especially after COVID-19. These two years has clearly showed us that everything can be pretty much done online. Online classes are quite convenient for students and colleges. For students,they don't have to travel to come to class and non-resident students don't have to pay the hostel fees. For colleges they have reduction in electricity bills, dorm expenses, canteen expenses etc.
Online programs are quite popular because people can access it and study it from anywhere around the world. They don't have to be physically present in order to study. Since it's online it's not necessary for them to stay in and around colleges or universities. Dorms are usually used by the students and sometimes by the teachers to stay in order to study at a particular university. Since most of the students preferred online program, they would have stayed at their own houses That is why there has been reduction of Dorm expenses. This is beneficiary for the students and the university as well
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- Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent During the same year Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space mo 37
e-rater score report
No. of Words: 176 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 176 350
No. of Characters: 851 1500
No. of Different Words: 104 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.835 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.518 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.343 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.091 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... for students and colleges. For students,they dont have to travel to come to class an...
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tudents and colleges. For students,they dont have to travel to come to class and non...
^^^^
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...come to class and non-resident students dont have to pay the hostel fees. For colleg...
^^^^
Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls, dorm expenses, canteen expenses etc. Online programs are quite popular becaus...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...it from anywhere around the world. They dont have to be physically present in order ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey would have stayed at their own houses That is why there has been reduction of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 2260.96107784 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 441.139720559 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62808704878 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 204.123752495 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.468620217663 129% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 705.55239521 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.251203628 57.8364921388 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 5.70786347227 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 5.15768463074 39% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140023849858 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573802075532 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351087375394 0.0701772020484 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112083784484 0.128457276422 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00976404358749 0.0628817314937 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 98.500998004 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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