Localnews and weather coverage
It is evident that there has been complaints from viewers regarding shortening the time allocated for local and weather news,it quite justifiable
that restoring the time that was devoted to local and weather news will not only help in avoiding losing any further advertising revenues but also restore its viewers.
So,increasing the telecasting time for weather and local news might help to restore the viewership of that television station since there have been many complaints received from the viewers.Since,there have been complaints from viewers it surely effects the TRP rating of that channel which will in turn impact the advertising contracts.As it is all interconnected,it will be advantageous for the television station to follow their previous schedule and increase the telecasting time for local and weather news.
Since most of the complaints by the viewers were regarding the reduction in coverage of local and weather news,increase in its coverage will help the television station to regain their viewers and increase its TRP.This will help in not loosing any further television contracts.
In conclusion,increasing the coverage of local news and weather will help the television station to regain its viewers and help in not loosing any further advertising contracts.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The essay is out of topic. This is not an issue essay but an argument essay.
No. of Words: 207 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 207 350
No. of Characters: 1071 1500
No. of Different Words: 84 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.174 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.697 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 41.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.827 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.627 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.847 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.301 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ime allocated for local and weather news,it quite justifiable that restoring the t...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
...nues but also restore its viewers. So,increasing the telecasting time for weather and lo...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...ny complaints received from the viewers.Since,there have been complaints from viewers...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ny complaints received from the viewers.Since,there have been complaints from viewers...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...mplaints received from the viewers.Since,there have been complaints from viewers it su...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...n turn impact the advertising contracts.As it is all interconnected,it will be adv...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ng contracts.As it is all interconnected,it will be advantageous for the television...
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Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increase
...on in coverage of local and weather news,increase in its coverage will help the televisio...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...gain their viewers and increase its TRP.This will help in not loosing any further te...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
...r television contracts. In conclusion,increasing the coverage of local news and weather ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 2260.96107784 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 441.139720559 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56565656566 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21562923871 2.78398813304 116% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 204.123752495 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429292929293 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 705.55239521 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.8473053892 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.25876257 57.8364921388 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.5 119.503703932 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 23.324526521 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.70786347227 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146780135889 0.218282227539 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120869880457 0.0743258471296 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411538816457 0.0701772020484 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107874019219 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435681509221 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 14.3799401198 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 48.3550499002 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.197005988 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.5979740519 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 98.500998004 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 12.3882235529 234% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.1389221557 194% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.9071856287 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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