Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all
people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that
a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow
flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the
argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The administration should consult a doctor regarding the issue. This is of utmost and pioneer job that should
be done.
Health of the common people should be the ultimate priority. Also the issue is very sensitive. So proper
validated methods with background research and proofs is necessary. At first, examination and sampling
must be done. Doctors should study the results and then take the decissions. Vaccination is always helpful if
it is properly done. So inoculations must be verified.
Side by side, the reasons of the cow flu should also be studied. Awareness should be spread if there is any
other precautions against the disease.
If from previous experience it is found that inoculations have a small possibility that a person will die, still it
must be applied , if helpful. Because death of one people is anyway better than saving lives of thousands
others.
- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to allpeople in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility thata person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit 33
- All too often, companies hire outsideconsultants to suggest ways for thecompany to operate more efficiently.If companies were to spend more timelistening to their own employees, suchconsultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discussthe 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Be
...of utmost and pioneer job that should be done. Health of the common people sho...
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Suggestion: Also,
...people should be the ultimate priority. Also the issue is very sensitive. So proper ...
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...he issue is very sensitive. So proper validated methods with background research and pr...
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...y. At first, examination and sampling must be done. Doctors should study the resul...
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...ons. Vaccination is always helpful if it is properly done. So inoculations must ...
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...ness should be spread if there is any other precautions against the disease. If f...
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...lity that a person will die, still it must be applied , if helpful. Because death ...
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Suggestion: ,
...son will die, still it must be applied , if helpful. Because death of one people...
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...till it must be applied , if helpful. Because death of one people is anyway better th...
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Suggestion: Others
...better than saving lives of thousands others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, if, regarding, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 28.8173652695 24% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 55.5748502994 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 2260.96107784 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 441.139720559 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23611111111 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.56307096286 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7928394937 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 204.123752495 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.468620217663 139% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 705.55239521 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.8473053892 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8580510072 57.8364921388 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 119.503703932 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0769230769 23.324526521 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.15768463074 174% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160670676992 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501682385783 0.0743258471296 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523147098924 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063730906877 0.128457276422 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558701122123 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 48.3550499002 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.197005988 52% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 98.500998004 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 12.3882235529 32% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.1389221557 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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