Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculation against cow flu to be routinely administered
According to the the speaker given the argument is not completely
acceptable with the information given it is not convincing with the
evidence proffered about the inoculations against cow flu.The
evidence is insubstantial,unrepresentative to the issues
involved.Therefore unless a number of questions are not answered
satisfactorily this cannot be considered as a cogent argument.
Firstly the speaker states that Many Lives might be saved if they
inoculate against cow flu but forgot to mention the exact
number or data relatively.It was also not mentioned as why should
this be administered to all people in areas where the diseases is
detected does he mean that it is some important issue or some disease
which was not addressed which costs lives and also what kind of
disease is not given in the argument.
Secondly the speaker haven't mentioned in detail about what it means
the possibility of person would die as a result of the
inoculations.This means that there was some serious issue which took
many lives and is not clearly present here.What if the death of a
person might be some other reason but they put it under this case.It
would be more insightful if the speaker would take a survey from the
people who lives in the particular area and come to a conclusion
based on the information.
Thirdly there was no proper information about cow flu what was the
reason for the inoculation and is it done frequently or was there any
particular time.The inoculations against cow flu cannot be routinely
addressed to people does that mean people should know regarding it or
might be people would object if they were informed.
In the conclusion the argument presented by the author not only
suffers from flawed assumptions but also lack evidences in developing
his recommendation and no clear information about the inoculations
against cow flu and the reason
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 318 350
No. of Characters: 1535 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.827 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.807 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 2.304 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.238 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.025 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 30 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
According to the the speaker given the argument is not compl...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
According to the the speaker given the argument is not compl...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Evidence
...n given it is not convincing with the evidence proffered about the inoculations agains...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... about the inoculations against cow flu.The evidence is insubstantial,unrepresent...
^^^
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , unrepresentative
... cow flu.The evidence is insubstantial,unrepresentative to the issues involved.Therefore unle...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Involved
...antial,unrepresentative to the issues involved.Therefore unless a number of questions ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...representative to the issues involved.Therefore unless a number of questions are not an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...representative to the issues involved.Therefore unless a number of questions are not an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Satisfactorily
... number of questions are not answered satisfactorily this cannot be considered as a cogent a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Number
...w flu but forgot to mention the exact number or data relatively.It was also not ment...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...n the exact number or data relatively.It was also not mentioned as why should ...
^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Disease
...ich costs lives and also what kind of disease is not given in the argument. Secondl...
^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...in the argument. Secondly the speaker havent mentioned in detail about what it means...
^^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inoculations
...f person would die as a result of the inoculations.This means that there was some serious ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 31, column 14, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...d die as a result of the inoculations.This means that there was some serious issue...
^^^^
Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...ere was some serious issue which took many lives and is not clearly present here.W...
^^^^
Line 33, column 44, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
...y lives and is not clearly present here.What if the death of a person might be som...
^^^^
Line 35, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Person
...y present here.What if the death of a person might be some other reason but they put...
^^^^^^
Line 35, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... reason but they put it under this case.It would be more insightful if the speak...
^^
Line 41, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Based
...ticular area and come to a conclusion based on the information. Thirdly there was...
^^^^^
Line 47, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Particular
...s it done frequently or was there any particular time.The inoculations against cow flu c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 47, column 17, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ntly or was there any particular time.The inoculations against cow flu cannot be ...
^^^
Line 51, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Might
...an people should know regarding it or might be people would object if they were inf...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28802588997 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24310922721 2.78398813304 116% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472491909385 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.8473053892 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.9497637573 57.8364921388 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 326.8 119.503703932 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.8 23.324526521 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.2 5.70786347227 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 5.15768463074 582% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318772063161 0.218282227539 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167938607656 0.0743258471296 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727420477478 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798810746225 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875717449635 0.0628817314937 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 14.3799401198 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 48.3550499002 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.197005988 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.5979740519 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.32208582834 121% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 12.3882235529 250% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.1389221557 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.9071856287 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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