Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
According to the author many deaths happened due to inability to routine vaccination for the disease (cow flue) in detected areas. But there is small possibility of death of person due to the vaccination. therefore they cannot permit routinely vaccination. But, the few questions are left unanswered by the author, some of them, are as follow.
As the author says the many lives can be saved if the vaccination is taken routinely against the disease (cow flow) in the area where the disease is detected. But, he (author) did not mentioned the number of the deaths occurred. Are they in the hundreds, thousands or less than the hundred? the number of the persons died should be mentioned in the passage.
After that the author adds that the since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations. How small is the possibility of the death? Is that one in ten, or one in hundreds, or one in thousands? it is not mentioned in the passage by the author. This should be mentioned in passage. Even if the possibility of the death is high, they should not have taken the risks to die more person.
However, they cannot permit inoculations against cow flue to be routinely done. Is it the only reason for not to do the vaccination routinely? Or there are other reasons to not providing the vaccinations routinely? Are the inoculations are available in small numbers to provide routinely or there is not enough manpower to provide the inoculations?
These specific evidences are should be provided by the author.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...death of person due to the vaccination. therefore they cannot permit routinely vaccinatio...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...death of person due to the vaccination. therefore they cannot permit routinely vaccinatio...
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Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...swered by the author, some of them, are as follow. As the author says the many lives c...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'authors'.
Suggestion: authors
... where the disease is detected. But, he author did not mentioned the number of the dea...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
...ase is detected. But, he author did not mentioned the number of the deaths occurred. Are ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ds, thousands or less than the hundred? the number of the persons died should be me...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ince there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inocu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r one in hundreds, or one in thousands? it is not mentioned in the passage by the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20202020202 0.25644967241 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.171717171717 0.15541462614 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673400673401 0.0836205057962 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0606060606061 0.0520304965353 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.026936026936 0.0272364105082 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127946127946 0.125424944231 102% => OK
Participles: 0.047138047138 0.0416121511921 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78508682246 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03367003367 0.026700313972 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.13468013468 0.113004496875 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026936026936 0.0255425247493 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.003367003367 0.0127820249294 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1543.0 2731.13054187 56% => OK
No of words: 267.0 446.07635468 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77902621723 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.57801047555 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325842696629 0.378187486979 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239700374532 0.287650121315 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176029962547 0.208842608468 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142322097378 0.135150697306 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78508682246 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 207.018472906 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438202247191 0.469332199767 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.5652970021 52.1807786196 78% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0526315789 23.2022227129 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9079131505 57.7814097925 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2105263158 141.986410481 57% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0526315789 23.2022227129 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.315789473684 0.724660767414 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.0226690321 51.9672348444 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.45454545455 1.8405768891 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498218262182 0.441005458295 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15404714463 0.135418324435 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995700566902 0.0829849096947 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601977132426 0.58762219726 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184078161995 0.147661913831 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20075777176 0.193483328276 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110652547846 0.0970749176394 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399977280588 0.42659136922 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.174875096508 0.0774707102158 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299818398076 0.312017818177 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118259365186 0.0698173142475 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.82512315271 228% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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