Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Nature's way franchises will be successful in the town of Plainsville.
The author assumes that Nature's way, a chain store selling health-related products in the town of Plainsville would be very successful. However, he lacks demographic trends to support his stance. profit comes from how many people buy, but if the number of people living in Plainsville is short in number in the first place, it would be hard to say that Nature's way would prove to be successful. In fact, even though residents in Plainsville live healthy lives, it is hard to generalize whether every single residents live a healthy life and are all willing to buy products from Nature's way. Speaking of living healthy life, there could be other strong competitive stores selling relative products that the residents have used. therefore, to suggest that Nature's way at Plainsville would prove to be successful, the author would need to consider competition between other industries and added numerical evidence to support his assumption.
In addition, author mentions that the store selling running shoes and exercise clothing have been successful in Plainsville. Yet, the credibility of merchants report are not described in details. What if the organization of merchants report are not involved in the field of shoes and clothing? even if the author guarantee the reliability of report, the extend of all-time high are not clear. Hence, the author need to consider various conditions of different period and the degree of "high".
The author suggest one reason to support his opinion as the number of people enrolled in the local health club, which is steadily increase and the classes regarding training and aerobics are always full. nonetheless, even the most people in Plainsville enrolled in local health club, profits of Nature's way could be lower than expected because of the dearth of people in local health club. The sample measure of the local health club member are not detailed. Besides, there could be some people who are only interested in weight training, not the health-related products. therefore, the high enrollment probability of people in Plainsville cannot guarantee the profits of successful of Nature's way.
The author assumes that the children and students in Plainsville would be potential customers of Nature's way because these children are required to attend in a fitness program. he lacks the widespread attitude of student who follow the rule because most students could satisfy minimum extend of assignment. Thus, students probably might not be active as to do more actions for their healthier life. even though they are copious of students who are willing to buy Nature's way product, the number of students in Plainsville could be relatively small to be successful.
In conclusion, the degree of demographic data unwarranted in most assumption and data the author used to support his stance. even in guarantee the degree of number of people live in Plainsville, willingness of people and creativeness between other product and Nature's way product cannot be ensured.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 493 350
No. of Characters: 2534 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.712 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.14 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.74 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 206 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 149 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 106 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.649 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.395 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.194 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 493 350
No. of Characters: 2534 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.712 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.14 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.74 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 206 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 149 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 106 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.649 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.395 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.194 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Profit
...mographic trends to support his stance. profit comes from how many people buy, but if ...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: short
...mber of people living in Plainsville is short in number in the first place, it would be hard to...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... products that the residents have used. therefore, to suggest that Natures way at Plainsv...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... evidence to support his assumption. In addition, author mentions that the st...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ved in the field of shoes and clothing? even if the author guarantee the reliability...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...or guarantee the reliability of report, the extend of all-time high are not clear. Hence, ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and the degree of 'high'. The author suggest one reason to support...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...ee of 'high'. The author suggest one reason to support his opinion as th...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...he local health club, which is steadily increase and the classes regarding training and ...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nonetheless
... training and aerobics are always full. nonetheless, even the most people in Plainsville e...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d aerobics are always full. nonetheless, even the most people in Plainsville enro...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ining, not the health-related products. therefore, the high enrollment probability of peo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rofits of successful of Natures way. The author assumes that the children and...
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Suggestion: He
...equired to attend in a fitness program. he lacks the widespread attitude of studen...
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Suggestion: Even
... more actions for their healthier life. even though they are copious of students who...
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Suggestion:
...e relatively small to be successful. In conclusion, the degree of demographic...
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Suggestion: Even
... the author used to support his stance. even in guarantee the degree of number of pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, speaking of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 55.5748502994 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2600.0 2260.96107784 115% => OK
No of words: 493.0 441.139720559 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2738336714 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84031869256 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432048681542 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 705.55239521 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4132827608 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.043478261 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4347826087 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.70786347227 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.20758483034 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33988614881 0.218282227539 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108251156569 0.0743258471296 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111519419367 0.0701772020484 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193564726463 0.128457276422 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110131423368 0.0628817314937 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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