in order serious un employment in our town.
The argument topic is to the to manufacturing of the car in hillview landfill and so much problem that in manufacturing process and after this manufacturing process town take profit of the car manufacturing.
So the author said in the argument in this topic allviate the seroious unemployement problem in our town.
So some people is encurage to the other to new manufacturing autotech build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area.
The first think we discuss about the plant manufacturing in town. A town is a hillview landfill, it is undevloped for the decades, is a perferct side for the plant because of that this toen people has unemployment so this manufacturing plant we have easily get to the worker of this toen and yet that not more money paid to this work. So materiaL easily avlilebale to this out side and not more cost off that material.
Second think is the building and staffing of this plant will put to the work thosands of hillview resident left tcomputech computer softwere programming company ababdoned its national facility off the last year.
So that in this view of this automanufacturing company is so gaint to the town unemplyoment people .
Third think is the company have so many unempyolment so we asking the city council
to authorize a large camaigan to attract to the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town and we asjking them to atteactive to this gaint of the carmanufacturing.
Tis argument topic is author said must be write in this topic but is not so far much covered to this topic ain this peregrap so we habe concusion that the author argumenrt topic and we have not satisfid to this argument.
- in order serious un employment in our town. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The argument topic is to the to manufacturing of the car in...
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... So some people is encurage to the other to new manufacturing autotech build its ...
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...ant because of that this toen people has unemployment so this manufacturing plant...
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Suggestion: got; gotten
...this manufacturing plant we have easily get to the worker of this toen and yet that...
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.... So materiaL easily avlilebale to this out side and not more cost off that material. ...
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...so gaint to the town unemplyoment people . Third think is the company have so m...
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...is the company have so many unempyolment so we asking the city council to author...
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...igan to attract to the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301003344482 0.25644967241 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.15541462614 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0836205057962 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535117056856 0.0520304965353 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0272364105082 160% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103678929766 0.125424944231 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0267558528428 0.0416121511921 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98229528483 2.79052419416 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.056856187291 0.026700313972 213% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00334448160535 0.001811407834 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.150501672241 0.113004496875 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0066889632107 0.0255425247493 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0127820249294 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1697.0 2731.13054187 62% => OK
No of words: 288.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89236111111 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277777777778 0.378187486979 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236111111111 0.287650121315 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.208842608468 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100694444444 0.135150697306 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98229528483 2.79052419416 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 207.018472906 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454861111111 0.469332199767 97% => OK
Word variations: 43.4791231984 52.1807786196 83% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.039408867 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 28.8 23.2022227129 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9104024174 57.7814097925 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.7 141.986410481 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 23.2022227129 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.724660767414 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.14285714286 175% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.4111111111 51.9672348444 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.89705882353 1.8405768891 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119831813284 0.441005458295 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.214399435837 0.135418324435 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0726208014181 0.0829849096947 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.888314653219 0.58762219726 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214770667198 0.147661913831 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911818729583 0.193483328276 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903148039715 0.0970749176394 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243401940122 0.42659136922 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0802042203509 0.0774707102158 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888820547149 0.312017818177 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892912500183 0.0698173142475 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 14.657635468 55% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.