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The argument topic discuss about the investment of the new company to devloped satellite thechnology has been approved by FTA to compete with the current satellite provider so investe invest to this new company new get profit after some year. i have argument to this topic the why new company not is in your comapny has developed to the satellite.
The first think of this argument is techcorporation is your top of investment of this term.So i was thinking that why should not a compltely investment of this new company.It is invested compltely so you have not other your invested .and techcorporation is not fully investe to this company so you have urge your other clients and we have intreted so it give handered person investment of this new company.
The second think isnew company is developed to the new technology and afther the ten year if it has benifit to the new company.a consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty persent of respondents were dissartified with current satellite so we have disided to the nwe comapany and monopoly the new satellite television providerand new venture of thecorporesion into satellite will prove to br highly profiteble for those invest now.
Because of this argument we havr conculed that the nwe company has good but not efficeny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of the new company to devloped satellite thechnology has been approved by FTA to ...
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...been approved by FTA to compete with the current satellite provider so investe in...
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...company new get profit after some year. i have argument to this topic the why ne...
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...ome year. i have argument to this topic the why new company not is in your comapny has ...
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... year. i have argument to this topic the why new company not is in your comapny h...
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...this argument is techcorporation is your top of investment of this term.So i was ...
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...is your top of investment of this term.So i was thinking that why should not a co...
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...your top of investment of this term.So i was thinking that why should not a comp...
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...ompltely investment of this new company.It is invested compltely so you have not o...
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...tely so you have not other your invested .and techcorporation is not fully investe...
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...ther clients and we have intreted so it give handered person investment of this new ...
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...technology and afther the ten year if it has benifit to the new company.a consume...
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...as benifit to the new company.a consumer survey last year indicated that over eig...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239819004525 0.25644967241 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.194570135747 0.15541462614 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131221719457 0.0836205057962 157% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542986425339 0.0520304965353 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0497737556561 0.0272364105082 183% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.125424944231 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0542986425339 0.0416121511921 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.816727685 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0452488687783 0.026700313972 169% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113122171946 0.113004496875 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00904977375566 0.0255425247493 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00904977375566 0.0127820249294 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1302.0 2731.13054187 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 446.07635468 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.57801047555 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345622119816 0.378187486979 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299539170507 0.287650121315 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207373271889 0.208842608468 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124423963134 0.135150697306 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.816727685 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 207.018472906 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506912442396 0.469332199767 108% => OK
Word variations: 45.2368372345 52.1807786196 87% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 43.4 23.2022227129 187% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 148.104557661 57.7814097925 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.4 141.986410481 183% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.4 23.2022227129 187% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.724660767414 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.58251231527 363% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 73.3539170507 51.9672348444 141% => OK
Elegance: 1.37878787879 1.8405768891 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0544830858859 0.441005458295 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.300673089319 0.135418324435 222% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10076747395 0.0829849096947 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.941956820393 0.58762219726 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.083627432697 0.147661913831 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311570804679 0.193483328276 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294669455272 0.0970749176394 30% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254371785581 0.42659136922 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0619945678777 0.0774707102158 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0326733996415 0.312017818177 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293907700652 0.0698173142475 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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