First off, there is no evidence that the complaints received from the viewers were only related to late-night weather programs.May be nobody watches the latenight programs and the channel has reduced the coverage of local news even during the prime-time.If we get evidence for this then we can be sure that the viewers are unhappy with only latenight local news coverage
Secondly, Is there any evidence to suggest that advertisers cancelled only because they were concerned about viewership of the late night programs? It might just be a coincidence. Or they might have moved on to prime time for advertising slots. We are not sure whats the real reason for their cancellation. Someone needs to investigate whats the real reason for them to cancel the contract. If its because of the viewers of late night show were declining then we need to take necessary action to increase the coverage of local and weather news.
Also we need to be sure, lose of revenues is completely attributed to late night program only; there is a mention that local news was given less time not that it was completely off air. Was it signficant enough to lose revenues ? there may be some other cause for the cessation of contracts.What gaurantee we can give viewers will be attracted if more time is devoted to weather during late night news? May be people have started concentrating only on the prime time news. Or may be they have moved on to different channel. We need to be sure of the reason before increasing the local news level. May be channel itself is losing its popularity, there might be another channel which is airing news without any undue bias.
If we get the answers for the above queries we can take further steps to attract viewers and increase profit for the program.
- TOEFL integrated writing: Altruism. 73
- An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be p 50
- The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University:A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for thei 50
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 70
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: May
... related to late night weather programs.May be nobody watches the latenight program...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...f local news even during the prime time.If we get evidence for this then we can be...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... for advertising slots. We are not sure whats the real reason for their cancellation....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...cellation. Someone needs to investigate whats the real reason for them to cancel the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... coverage of local and weather news. Also we need to be sure, lose of revenues is...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...it signficant enough to lose revenues ? there may be some other cause for the cessati...
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Suggestion: What
...er cause for the cessation of contracts.What gaurantee we can give viewers will be a...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...trating only on the prime time news. Or may be they have moved on to different channel...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223241590214 0.25644967241 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.201834862385 0.15541462614 130% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100917431193 0.0836205057962 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0519877675841 0.0520304965353 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0611620795107 0.0272364105082 225% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107033639144 0.125424944231 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0489296636086 0.0416121511921 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50320225154 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428134556575 0.026700313972 160% => OK
Particles: 0.00305810397554 0.001811407834 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.085626911315 0.113004496875 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275229357798 0.0255425247493 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.0127820249294 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1772.0 2731.13054187 65% => OK
No of words: 309.0 446.07635468 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73462783172 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291262135922 0.378187486979 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236245954693 0.287650121315 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139158576052 0.208842608468 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938511326861 0.135150697306 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50320225154 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 207.018472906 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.469332199767 101% => OK
Word variations: 47.0550959738 52.1807786196 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0714285714 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.560013963 57.7814097925 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 141.986410481 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.724660767414 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.6960240407 51.9672348444 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.20388349515 1.8405768891 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391425673923 0.441005458295 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138088794541 0.135418324435 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115649908784 0.0829849096947 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523954122889 0.58762219726 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.229644170815 0.147661913831 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150453828044 0.193483328276 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113674779068 0.0970749176394 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372817365879 0.42659136922 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.134037525429 0.0774707102158 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277008706761 0.312017818177 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815921513302 0.0698173142475 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.82389162562 142% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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