Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The business manager of the television station states that they lose their advertising revenues.
The television station increased time to national news. For advertising national news there may be financial budget and this budget may be much more higher than advertising revenues of local news.
Advertising national news, most viewers complaints about the coverage of weather and local news. But we don't know, whether the television received any complaints from viewers for not advertinsing national news. May be the not advertising national news complaint percent can be much more than not advertising local news.
The business manager states that local news canceled their advertising contrats with the television station. We don't know whether these local news found any other televesion to advertise their news with low cost and that's why this television increased the time to national news advertisement.
All viewers will not be interested in all news. Some may be interested in local news while some other may be interested in national news. We do not know the percent of people who are interested in which news.
So, we need these above information to know why the television station has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...cial budget and this budget may be much more higher than advertising revenues of local news...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...erage of weather and local news. But we dont know, whether the television received a...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...for not advertinsing national news. May be the not advertising national news compl...
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Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not advertising national news complaint percent can be much more than not advert...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ontrats with the television station. We dont know whether these local news found any...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... advertise their news with low cost and thats why this television increased the time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 55.5748502994 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 2260.96107784 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 441.139720559 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32195121951 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69904691575 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 204.123752495 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419512195122 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 705.55239521 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0842450657 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9166666667 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.70786347227 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386734855137 0.218282227539 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197044265111 0.0743258471296 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112515468017 0.0701772020484 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235895323899 0.128457276422 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127432525686 0.0628817314937 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.32208582834 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 98.500998004 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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