In the memorandum from the business manager of a television station, it is stated that due to increase in the time to late night national news and less time to weather and local news, many of the viewers are complaining for the station coverage of the weather and local news and in addition local business that used to advertise, those contracts are being cancelled.To which the manager have come to the conclusion to restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level which help in attract more viewers to the program and avoid loosing any further adveretising revenues.However, before this recommendation can be truly evaluated, two questions must be answered.
First of all, how much percentage of people are complaining to on air the weather and local news. Are those people even comparable to the people who don't have any problem with late natinoal news? It's is also possible that complain getting registered for the local news in the certain area, which don't have a large population or this could also be done by certain set of people. However mainting local news and weather would certainly help to engage more number of viewers but needs to the calculate the exact proportion of people are who are really interested.And this argument only support for the past year but their might be a possibilty that in upcoming years more natinoal news viewers will get attracted and these small compaints would be least important for the company.
Sencondly, loosing the advertising contracts from local businesses is a lot less when compared to those businesses who want to advertise their businesses on natinoal level. What if running the advertisments for the local one start making losses for the national ones, which according to me would be much higher amount than the local ones.So a proper research needs to be done before evaluating the losses which will be incurred if local news starts to be air by giving sometime of national news adverstiments.
In conclusion, the argument, as it stands now, is considerable flawed due to the relaince on the several unwanted assumptions. If the author is able to provide answer to the above questions and offer more evidence(perharps in the form of systematic research study), then it is possibilty of recommendation that local and weather should be given certain amount of time for the local people resulting in less complains and lossing less contracts.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 410 350
No. of Characters: 1985 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.841 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.668 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 41 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.225 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.417 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.643 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.062 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...se, those contracts are being cancelled.To which the manager have come to the conc...
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Line 1, column 592, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...osing any further adveretising revenues.However, before this recommendation can be trul...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions must be answered. First of all, how much percentage of people are compla...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eople even comparable to the people who dont have any problem with late natinoal new...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e local news in the certain area, which dont have a large population or this could a...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... also be done by certain set of people. However mainting local news and weather would c...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...age more number of viewers but needs to the calculate the exact proportion of people are who ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...of people are who are really interested.And this argument only support for the past...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: LOOSING_EFFORTRECORDSEASON[1]
Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
...mportant for the company. Sencondly, loosing the advertising contracts from local busine...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... much higher amount than the local ones.So a proper research needs to be done befo...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'proper research'.
Suggestion: proper research
...ch higher amount than the local ones.So a proper research needs to be done before evaluating the ...
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Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun contracts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...resulting in less complains and lossing less contracts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 404.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00495049505 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80988023213 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482673267327 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.8473053892 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.652751471 57.8364921388 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.666666667 119.503703932 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.8888888889 23.324526521 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 5.70786347227 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293299571496 0.218282227539 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11843223973 0.0743258471296 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928617927589 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18759299987 0.128457276422 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972174699408 0.0628817314937 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 14.3799401198 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 12.3882235529 452% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.1389221557 176% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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