Several charitable organizations in Pleasantville provide opportunities for teenagers to engage in community service. These organizations have a great need for volunteers, but in recent years, the number of teenage volunteers has significantly declined.
The Pleasantville School Board should take measures to increase the number of volunteers. Teachers, parents, and other community members agree that it is important for young people to learn the value of community service. Requiring high school students to engage in community service would provide much-needed assistance to worthy local charities and would also help young people understand the importance of giving back to their community. For this reason, the Pleasantville School Board should institute a program requiring students of Pleasantville High School to complete 40 hours of community service prior to graduation.
This statement is based on increasing volunteers in charitable organizations. There are flows, i have come up with the statement.
Charitable organisations in Pleasantville are giving opportunities for teenagers to join in community service. So why do not teenagers come and join them. There is nothing wrong in charitable work, even teenagers are very enthusiastic and they would love to do all this stuff in their life. So here is some kind of problem i have seen in author's statement. In every country, many teenagers join charitable organizations and some teenagers also make charitable trust to help poor people. So teenagers always love to do this activity and thy have free times for charity trust.
Charity work is known as self awareness. If you engage with what is going on with some people and helping them without expectation, this is called charity work. Teenagers have to relaise the situation of them and start doing charity work. There is no need of measurement to increase the number of volunteers by The Pleasantville School Board. And in this line, school board can not do anything. They could only give right directions to teenagers, after that all will be depended on teenagers. They have to decide what is right or wrong for them. So this is another flow of statement.
If teachers, parents and other community members agree that it is important for young people to learn the value of community service, so that does not mean volunteers will increase and they will understand the situation. The main point is to realising. Teenagers should have to realiase this work and do it by themself. Tutors, parents and other people can not help them too. teenager should take the responsibility.
Charity work is self made work. There is no need of making it necessary. There will be some teenagers, who do not love to do this. So the Pleasantville School Board should not have to make it necessary for everyone. They should have to make an another statement, "Charity is not mandatory for students, who are interested in this work, they could give their names." So this would be appropriate for teenagers and they will surely take their responsibility towards good work.
I conclude that, charity work should be done by teenagers as many as possible. Charity work is also for those, who loves to do it. Charity work is not for those, who does not like it, but they are doing, because it is mandatory and gives benefits in marks.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236286919831 0.25644967241 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.189873417722 0.15541462614 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0590717299578 0.0836205057962 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042194092827 0.0520304965353 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0569620253165 0.0272364105082 209% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103375527426 0.125424944231 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0337552742616 0.0416121511921 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83624824813 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316455696203 0.026700313972 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00210970464135 0.001811407834 116% => OK
Determiners: 0.0738396624473 0.113004496875 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0337552742616 0.0255425247493 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147679324895 0.0127820249294 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2478.0 2731.13054187 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 446.07635468 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94244604317 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294964028777 0.378187486979 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232613908873 0.287650121315 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179856115108 0.208842608468 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153477218225 0.135150697306 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83624824813 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 207.018472906 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436450839329 0.469332199767 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.8536785719 52.1807786196 90% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.039408867 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3793103448 23.2022227129 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5162859851 57.7814097925 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4482758621 141.986410481 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3793103448 23.2022227129 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.206896551724 0.724660767414 29% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.58251231527 195% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.6407012321 51.9672348444 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.29197080292 1.8405768891 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274784031614 0.441005458295 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103471562907 0.135418324435 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0772505873044 0.0829849096947 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464592919397 0.58762219726 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151865508909 0.147661913831 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952133894734 0.193483328276 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850093747783 0.0970749176394 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352007526287 0.42659136922 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0718511302049 0.0774707102158 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177375242154 0.312017818177 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685085958683 0.0698173142475 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.33743842365 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.82512315271 166% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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