The argument above states that SuperCorps recently moved to its headquarters because Coprorateville is superior than Middleburg. A couple of reasons why it is assumed that Coprorateville is superior than Middleburg is due to the fact that taxes are lower and the employees prefer urban areas. The following argument is flawed for a number of reasons. Primarily, the arguments is based on unwarranted assumptions that Coprorateville is superior thank Middlesburg.
The argument starts by saying stating that recently there has been an urge on number of homeowners in Coporateville. There could be several different reasons why people want to move to Corporateville, it could be cheaper but that does not make it better. It is also stated that SperCorps worker's prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Based on the survey we can't assume that workers wil prefer workinf in Corporateville than in Middlesburg. It's important to note who took the survey and how many. The arguments doesn't state if it was majority of the staff that completed the survey. Maybe if we knew that all workers took the survey and they stated they prefered working in rural areas we can conclude that they would prefer working in Middlesburg. Event then, we would have to consider other factors to determine if Corporateville is superior to Middlesburg.
Furthermore, the argument assumes that lower taxes in the area means safer and cheaper place. The argument fails to elaborate how lower taxes would mean safer place. On the contrary if this place is a rural are that means that everything will be far away and not a lot of things with be industrialized. If someone has an accident at work, the ambulance will probably take a long time to get there since it is a rural area. The area may be cheaper for the headquarter owners but what about the employees? Perhaps the employees might need to drive further just to get to work, making the commute inconvenient fro everyone.
In conclusion, because the argument makes several assumptions, it fails to make a convincing case that Corporateville is superior than Middlesburg. Because taxes are lower and a lot of homeowners are moving to Corporateville it does not mean it was the best choice for Supercorp to move there
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Based on the survey we can't assume that workers wil prefer workinf in Corporateville than in Middlesburg.
Error: workinf Suggestion: working
Error: wil Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Maybe if we knew that all workers took the survey and they stated they prefered working in rural areas we can conclude that they would prefer working in Middlesburg.
Error: prefered Suggestion: No alternate word
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- not OK. the survey is only for living place. If the survey is for working place, people may like to live in an area that is urban.
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 379 350
No. of Characters: 1842 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.412 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.86 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.884 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.95 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.775 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.488 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...ters because Coprorateville is superior than Middleburg. A couple of reasons why it ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...assumed that Coprorateville is superior than Middleburg is due to the fact that taxe...
^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...owners in Coporateville. There could be several different reasons why people want to move to Corp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...at is not urban. Based on the survey we cant assume that workers wil prefer workinf ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... the survey and how many. The arguments doesnt state if it was majority of the staff t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ural area. The area may be cheaper for the headquarter owners but what about the employees? Pe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ive further just to get to work, making the commute inconvenient fro everyone. In conclu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...o work, making the commute inconvenient fro everyone. In conclusion, because the...
^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...ng case that Corporateville is superior than Middlesburg. Because taxes are lower an...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9708994709 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97402625603 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468253968254 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6500789888 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.95 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220765870618 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680775988532 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729759716219 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147365757896 0.128457276422 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716130440793 0.0628817314937 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.