Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than

Those anthropologists favoring interview-centered method in the future research may be directly influenced by the conclusion that Dr. Karp have made. However, the conclusion still remains questionable on several aspects.

Firstly, it might not be reasonable for Dr. Karp to compare with a conclusion drawn 20 years ago. In such a long time, the child-rearing traditions might have altered gradually and thus, Dr. Karp and Dr. Field, though conducting their research in different method, could both be impeccable. So, the first key question to be answered for evaluating the recommendation is that over the time gap of the two surveys, whether the child-rearing practices in Tertia island changed. If it has changed, the difference between results of the two research cannot be thought as error of research method. Thus, no conclusion about the priority of any method can be drawn.

The second crucial question is whether the locations where Dr. Karp and Dr. Field did their research matters. For example, would the recommendation still valid if Dr. Karp interviewed kids on the nearby islands of island Tertia, especially when those kids have been reared in various traditions? If yes, we might be able to believe future research should use interview-centered method.

The third matter is about the interview questions Dr. Karp used. According to Dr. Karp's direct results about the time kids spent talking about adults, Dr. Karp draw a conclusion on kids-rearing practices. But are the results a decisive index of child-rearing practice? If they are indeed relavent to some degree, the conclusion of Dr. Karp can be called valid.

Before the questions get answered, it's rational to be doubtful about the conclusion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, still, third, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 2260.96107784 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 441.139720559 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41578947368 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06431972902 2.78398813304 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.468620217663 133% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 705.55239521 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1230238962 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120728802908 0.218282227539 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503410642665 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374641179671 0.0701772020484 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656203254682 0.128457276422 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442125087835 0.0628817314937 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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