The argument presented by the author is not fully backed up by proper facts. Author concluded that the Palean basket were not uniquely Palean based on the current situation of Brim river and the absence of Palean boat in Lithos. The reasons provided by the author is based on several assumption which might be wrong.
With the course of time the dynamics of a river changes. Many river even change its direction of flow also.Some even change the course of flow. So the current scenario of Brim river might not be the case at the time of Palean society. There might be a chance that the river had not existed between these two society or not broad as the river is today, so people of these two society can easily had crossed it for trade or other purposes.
Another compelling reason might be that actually the might had boats but the boats were not like the boats of today's world that's why people are not able to draw the conclusion that they might have boats.It is also possible that with course of time the boat made by the just decayed. Many people in different part of world still uses the trunk of banana tree as boat. The trunk easily degrade with time of a few months.
The reason provided by the author that since woven baskets also find in Lithos, the baskets were not uniquely Palean because no other means of trade or exchange is possible at that time, might be a valid reason but proper facts providing the the evidence and supporting the reason must be found. There might be a possible explanation that the basket of Palean society has drowned and flown through the river and reached Lithos were people of Lithos tried to mimic it and finally succeeded.
According to the passage earlier it was assumed that the woven basket is uniquely Palean but with the evidence of it in Lithos changed the conclusion of the author. Therefore it might be possible that someday we find something else which against change our conclusion. So before going directly to any final conclusion we must analyze all the facts and check the validity of our assumption.
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 16
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 72
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- not OK. correct: people with boats may visit Palean village.
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1669 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.523 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.143 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.51 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...sons provided by the author is based on several assumption which might be wrong. With the course ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun river seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many rivers'.
Suggestion: Many rivers
...f time the dynamics of a river changes. Many river even change its direction of flow also....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...river even change its direction of flow also.Some even change the course of flow. So...
^^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
... even change its direction of flow also.Some even change the course of flow. So the ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... people of these two society can easily had crossed it for trade or other purposes....
^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...were not like the boats of todays world thats why people are not able to draw the con...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...e conclusion that they might have boats.It is also possible that with course of ti...
^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...valid reason but proper facts providing the the evidence and supporting the reason must...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...valid reason but proper facts providing the the evidence and supporting the reason must...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...wn through the river and reached Lithos were people of Lithos tried to mimic it and ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s changed the conclusion of the author. Therefore it might be possible that someday we fi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...clusion. So before going directly to any final conclusion we must analyze all the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 367.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62397820163 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21114102265 2.78398813304 79% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452316076294 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.644044192 57.8364921388 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829545492376 0.218282227539 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028196079473 0.0743258471296 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358350089839 0.0701772020484 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518022219316 0.128457276422 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283284045846 0.0628817314937 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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