In the argument above, the author claims that every college and university should adopt an honor code in order to decrease cheating among students, since a success in reducing the cheating rate was founf in Groveton college which imployed an honor code. In order to relay on this premise for the right reasons, the author need first to discuss severl questions to decide whethere it will be the right choice the generalize the findings from Grovetons college.
One basic question which should be addressed is whethere the drop in cheatings and the survey were found in ALL departments and across ALL years? If the answer it no, it should be well advised to check the results of the survey and the cheating reports by year (seniors vs. freshmens, undergrad vs. graduate, math vs. medicine). For exmepl, many studies showed the freshmens are more pron for cheating because of they have highier stress levels then the seniors.
Another question which should be addressed is whethere the population of Groveton college is a typical one? Is the Groveton an Ivy league university which attracks naturaly students which higher self-moral-code?. Ofcourse that an honor code can work well with students which already have higher self-moral or fear/respect from the authority. The question is whether such code can apply to students with less respect to authority or laws and norms. It is possible that in a college in which students are registaring only to get a degree and not an education, the cheating rates may be higher because of the different motives.
Finally, it will be interesting to know what senctions were given to students who are caugt cheating? If the punisment is too high, such as droping from school or a very high fine, it is possible that the reason for not cheating is the punisment and not the honor code or other self-moral-code.
In conclusion, I tend to agree with the notion of an honor code and storgnly support it's implamintation. Yet, It should be advised to answer the three questions raised here in order to make sure that the reason for not applying an honor code will still be higher then the reasons not to.
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Sentence: In order to relay on this premise for the right reasons, the author need first to discuss severl questions to decide whethere it will be the right choice the generalize the findings from Grovetons college.
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Sentence: For exmepl, many studies showed the freshmens are more pron for cheating because of they have highier stress levels then the seniors.
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Sentence: In conclusion, I tend to agree with the notion of an honor code and storgnly support it's implamintation.
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Sentence: In the argument above, the author claims that every college and university should adopt an honor code in order to decrease cheating among students, since a success in reducing the cheating rate was founf in Groveton college which imployed an honor code.
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Sentence: In order to relay on this premise for the right reasons, the author need first to discuss severl questions to decide whethere it will be the right choice the generalize the findings from Grovetons college.
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Sentence: One basic question which should be addressed is whethere the drop in cheatings and the survey were found in ALL departments and across ALL years?
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Sentence: If the answer it no, it should be well advised to check the results of the survey and the cheating reports by year seniors vs. freshmens, undergrad vs. graduate, math vs. medicine.
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Sentence: For exmepl, many studies showed the freshmens are more pron for cheating because of they have highier stress levels then the seniors.
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Sentence: Another question which should be addressed is whethere the population of Groveton college is a typical one?
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Sentence: Is the Groveton an Ivy league university which attracks naturaly students which higher self-moral-code?.
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entence: It is possible that in a college in which students are registaring only to get a degree and not an education, the cheating rates may be higher because of the different motives.
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Sentence: Finally, it will be interesting to know what senctions were given to students who are caugt cheating?
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Sentence: If the punisment is too high, such as droping from school or a very high fine, it is possible that the reason for not cheating is the punisment and not the honor code or other self-moral-code.
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Sentence: In conclusion, I tend to agree with the notion of an honor code and storgnly support it's implamintation.
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