Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reasons on which that claim is based.
Generally, we refer to those in power as leaders who are responsible for policy making and decision making. A leader is to a certain extent similar with a beacon that guides or directs others to achieve a common goal. While an effective leadership has become so important for an enterprise, in any field, should a leader down after five years, as the argument claims? Admittedly, such a policy has its merit in some respects. In my perspective, however, not all fields need their leaders to step down after a five-year term. In some fields, instead, a longer term even a lifelong term is more f...
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