Issue essay
Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated
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The progress of the country depends on the situation of it’s city. Every state as made up of the cities and the country is combined of states. So cities are in base of the country and which performs essential action in the progress of the country.
Various region of the nation is consist of different cultural environment. Combining the culture of all these cities the traditional image of the country comes on front. Government must have to look after the development and prosperity of cities in order to maintain the traditional culture of the country.
Culture of the city is associated with different religious as well historical places in the city, festival being celebrated in the city. Government has to look after all these in order to main the culture of the city. Finance is the important issue in this matter. As some of the cities can be encountered as a backward where average income is less, those people can not contribute too much in the development and cultural activities. Government must have to come in the picture in order to make the balance in this situation.
Every year different festivals are celebrated in the city which are based on the cultural and traditional life of the people. In such a case governments should promote such a occasions try to attract more and more people from all around. In the renovation of the different historical place government should take a responsibility and try to maintain that as the traditional culture is coming from historical time periods.
In some of the cities and regions there are very old historical places and traditions which people living there are maintaining. But as the renovation and the expense required for that can not be afforded by the local residence it required the function of government to keep them living. As the country is known due to the traditions and culture, government must have to look upon all this in order to maintain there image in the world culture and traditionalism.
Some of the countries from south Africa is know in the world for their unique styles, song, and dance. Because the country government has taken part in maintaining it and they have give economical help where ever it required. Without the help from the government it’s not possible for the local people to maintain culture and traditions. So government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
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Sentence: Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
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Sentence: Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated
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Sentence: The progress of the country depends on the situation of it's city.
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Sentence: Every state as made up of the cities and the country is combined of states.
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Sentence: So cities are in base of the country and which performs essential action in the progress of the country.
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Sentence: Various region of the nation is consist of different cultural environment.
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Sentence: Combining the culture of all these cities the traditional image of the country comes on front.
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Sentence: Government must have to look after the development and prosperity of cities in order to maintain the traditional culture of the country.
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Sentence: Culture of the city is associated with different religious as well historical places in the city, festival being celebrated in the city.
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Sentence: Government has to look after all these in order to main the culture of the city.
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Sentence: Finance is the important issue in this matter.
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Sentence: As some of the cities can be encountered as a backward where average income is less, those people can not contribute too much in the development and cultural activities.
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Sentence: Government must have to come in the picture in order to make the balance in this situation.
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Sentence: Every year different festivals are celebrated in the city which are based on the cultural and traditional life of the people.
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Sentence: In such a case governments should promote such a occasions try to attract more and more people from all around.
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Sentence: In the renovation of the different historical place government should take a responsibility and try to maintain that as the traditional culture is coming from historical time periods.
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Sentence: In some of the cities and regions there are very old historical places and traditions which people living there are maintaining.
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Sentence: But as the renovation and the expense required for that can not be afforded by the local residence it required the function of government to keep them living.
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Sentence: As the country is known due to the traditions and culture, government must have to look upon all this in order to maintain there image in the world culture and traditionalism.
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Sentence: Some of the countries from south Africa is know in the world for their unique styles, song, and dance.
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Sentence: Because the country government has taken part in maintaining it and they have give economical help where ever it required.
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Sentence: Without the help from the government it's not possible for the local people to maintain culture and traditions.
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Sentence: So government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
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Sentence: The progress of the country depends on the situation of it's city.
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Sentence: Every state as made up of the cities and the country is combined of states.
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Sentence: So cities are in base of the country and which performs essential action in the progress of the country.
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Sentence: Various region of the nation is consist of different cultural environment.
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Sentence: Combining the culture of all these cities the traditional image of the country comes on front.
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Sentence: Government must have to look after the development and prosperity of cities in order to maintain the traditional culture of the country.
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Sentence: Culture of the city is associated with different religious as well historical places in the city, festival being celebrated in the city.
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Sentence: Government has to look after all these in order to main the culture of the city.
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Sentence: Finance is the important issue in this matter.
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Sentence: As some of the cities can be encountered as a backward where average income is less, those people can not contribute too much in the development and cultural activities.
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Sentence: Government must have to come in the picture in order to make the balance in this situation.
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Sentence: Every year different festivals are celebrated in the city which are based on the cultural and traditional life of the people.
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Sentence: In such a case governments should promote such a occasions try to attract more and more people from all around.
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Sentence: In the renovation of the different historical place government should take a responsibility and try to maintain that as the traditional culture is coming from historical time periods.
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Sentence: In some of the cities and regions there are very old historical places and traditions which people living there are maintaining.
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Sentence: But as the renovation and the expense required for that can not be afforded by the local residence it required the function of government to keep them living.
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Sentence: As the country is known due to the traditions and culture, government must have to look upon all this in order to maintain there image in the world culture and traditionalism.
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Sentence: Some of the countries from south Africa is know in the world for their unique styles, song, and dance.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and know
Sentence: Because the country government has taken part in maintaining it and they have give economical help where ever it required.
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Suggestion: Refer to have and give
Description: The fragment where ever it is rare
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Sentence: Without the help from the government it's not possible for the local people to maintain culture and traditions.
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Sentence: So government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
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