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It is not possible for one person to succeed without another, somewhere, failing.
It is not possible for one person to succeed without another, somewhere, failing.
The above statement is not exactly true because, one person to be successful doesn't need another person failing. Success and failure depends on individual's effort and luck. There is success and failure in this world because it's the individual's capabilities and the way he chooses to be successful or to be a failure.
In today's world, everyone wants to be successful. In this race of being successful, some people choose easy way and some will choose a difficult and more efficient way. Hence, the choices they make decides whether they will be successful or fail in that task. For example, o...
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Sentence: The other person say for example person BPB also starts the same business.
Description: The fragment person say for is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace say with verb, past participle
Sentence: Success and failure both depends on how persistent the person will be towards achieving his goal and what paths he will choose.
Description: The fragment both depends on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace depends with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: The tag an adjective is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to persistent and the
Sentence: Everyone is not successful or everyone is not a failure in this world because everyone are different and everyone have different circumstances and situations in their life.
Description: A pronoun, nominal is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', present tense, 2nd person singular or all
Suggestion: Refer to everyone and are
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1812 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.768 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.576 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.454 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5