People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Author asserts that while preparing for some action, people should consider the consequences carefully beforehand. There are several occasions in life when a person has to take risk personally and professionally for the betterment of his life or for the betterment of the society. However, it's always prudent to consider all the possible outcomes and plan keeping all the risk factors in mind. This is what called the calculated risk and so the saying goes - "Expect the best but be prepared for the worst." Man is bestowed with his unique ability to think and analyze. Taking an action without plan...
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