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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... are adequately trained. I argue that a nations education system, before college, shoul...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 653, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...college, there should be two parts to a nations education system: a national curriculum...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...unicate and share ideas since they were have similar training. Providing a Metr...
^^^^
Line 27, column 401, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... it would be unwise to put them through all of the same rigor as students who do not have ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 48.0 19.5258426966 246% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 34.0 12.4196629213 274% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4169.0 2235.4752809 186% => OK
No of words: 795.0 442.535393258 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24402515723 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.30996651211 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83931832855 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412578616352 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1321.2 704.065955056 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 16.0 1.77640449438 901% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4806902282 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.87878787879 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257486478516 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885481915472 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582026865929 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16037337849 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466274256844 0.0667264976115 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 173.0 100.480337079 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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