Cooperation is an important tool lacking in younger generation due to competitive world. People compete with each other in all fields, and they lose belief in others while trying to reach their apex.
A vision of a leader can be achieved by the cooperation of its employees or members. Different fields had different requirements, cooperation is valued more in government than any other fields. Any good deeds or process in government can only be achieved by cooperation among several officers, citizen's cooperation is vital for any government rule or action. Example: A bill passed to make the city cleaner can be achieved only when citizens oblige to it.
Great minds working together would produce greater results, young minds when working together as a team could produce amazing results. Many ideas from different people and different perspectives can be aggregated together to produce better results. A place with teamwork and cooperation would lead to less stress and increase productivity. A competition provides a sense of insecurity and people will lack faith in others.
In bigger picture competition helps in overall improvement. Example: Apple and Samsung compete with each other to provide greater smartphones. In the process of competition, they made greater inventions leading to an evolution in the mobile and smartphone world. Competition brings a need to improve frequently to outstrip the competitors. Government competing with other states or country could provide a greater society.
Cooperation helps in achieving the dream or goal but competition helps in improving the field and adds to the betterment of the field.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 16
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- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station."Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaint 59
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43968871595 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95088410447 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0041312824 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.375 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080057877883 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262845688775 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199738498956 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443136920753 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0070164191048 0.0667264976115 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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