103. The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Where the good ideas which have changed the previous ways of thinking or found totally new ideas come from? It is complicated to tell the exact source of conspicuous ideas. Some people argue that some extraordinary ways of thinking have been the source of the best ideas whereas some contend that passionate cares in usaul circumstances can contribute to result in breakthroughs. While both sides are worth considering as we think of diverse process in making a good idea in history, I think the latter has contributed more on meaningful ideas in current world.
Admittedly, we see a plenty of ideas which have converted our lives in history are the result of some extraordinary people and their devotion. Prodigious scientists and artists who devoted their lives to find new ways of thinking and techniques are the cases. A minority of excelled experts have developed the best ideas such as invention of electricity, modern vehicles, and making spaceship. We see many new findings are made from passionate interests in specialized fields.
Nonetheless we can find many cases of best ideas raised from a passionate care in commonplace things. First case can be numerous inventions in science field. Many of us may have heard the way Newton found his luminous finding when he was sitting under a tree. While watching a falling apple, he found the invisible notion of gravity. Without care in commonplace environment around him, Newton might not have this stimuli in investing the reason why every object on earth falls.
Another field developed from common surrounding is the field of art. Especially Impressionism, which depicts the light in ephemeral way, is invented from the passionate looking at a painter's circumstances including natural light on landscapes. Many of renowned painters representing Impressionism such as Manet and Monet, became famous since they try to find the subtle change of landscapes due to the change of sunlight throughout a day. Without sincere care on general environments around them, those famous paintings could not have been drawn.
In conclusion, in many of cases, I believe the best ideas are all around us. Some ideas in history might be derived from a special process or a smart person. Yet we can find many of cases that found the unprecedented ways of thinking are accomplished due to passionate care on one’s surrounding in everyday life.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Some people argue that some extraordinary ways of thinking have been the source of the best ideas whereas some contend that passionate cares in usaul circumstances can contribute to result in breakthroughs.
Error: usaul Suggestion: usual
flaws:
The second paragraph is a little off the topic. The essay topic is not related to extraordinary/ordinary people, while you:
'we see a plenty of ideas which have converted our lives in history are the result of some extraordinary people and their devotion.'
Need more arguments in the third paragraph.
read a sample:
http://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-issue-task-essays/best-ideas-arise-passi…
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 390 350
No. of Characters: 1956 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.444 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.015 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.829 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.989 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...nate interests in specialized fields. Nonetheless we can find many cases of best ideas ra...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...s. Nonetheless we can find many cases of best ideas raised from a passionate care in ...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nment around him, Newton might not have this stimuli in investing the reason why eve...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267772511848 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.168246445498 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111374407583 0.0880659088768 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0142180094787 0.0497285424764 29% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0450236966825 0.0444667217837 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151658767773 0.12292977631 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0616113744076 0.0406280797675 152% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87567160495 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0142180094787 0.030933414821 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0947867298578 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189573459716 0.0249443105267 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189573459716 0.0148568991511 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2388.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 452.878318584 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12307692308 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361538461538 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184615384615 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135897435897 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87567160495 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535897435897 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.993905864 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9382632063 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 46.4230769231 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.11458333333 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332479089748 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0927768891655 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688959161448 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507893435164 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125182867958 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133598912109 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578736554963 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292263417013 0.385218514788 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0745194585872 0.0692045440612 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233817400129 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300259175357 0.0653680567796 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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