All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently.If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees,such consultancies would be unnecessary.
There is always a keen difference outward and inward members of any firm.The prompt recommends that building the firm in the way it should be by taking ideas from within the organization as well.In my opinion, I mostly support the Issue which is spending time on current employee's of the firm who gives ideas to create and build and reorganize the firm's management will to get efficient results, I advocate my thesis with two reasons.
To begin,when a firm hires some of the consultants who are apart from the company, firstly they take and train the consultants over a particular subject for some days when they get familiar with their working they come up with some ideas which may or may not be efficient,Contrarily they have to face the consequence of time and money spent over them.Which on a annual scale is huge.For instance, if a product base company hires consultants they need to pay them and should allot time for explaining the procedures of the company and hence they come up with the solutions and its a time taking and quite economical.Rather investing the same amount to their current employee's the respective firm would save humongous amount of money annually.
Furthermore, a firm listening to their own employee's would really boost up their faith in the company.Henceforth they would be more efficient than before,compounding to it they don't need to explain the working of the firm widely as they already the part of it and know in a pellucid manner how the product is working.A firm listening to their employee's would be economical and would be galvanizing them towards the company and they would get to better solutions.
Of course, by hiring consultancies outside the company would also be a good choice but listening to their employee's would be economical and the solutions would be in no time.
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- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently.If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees,such consultancies would be unnecessary. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90291262136 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00058121118 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501618122977 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.765254713 60.3974514979 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.75 118.986275619 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.25 23.4991977007 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.75 5.21951772744 627% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261984334314 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183571415004 0.0831039109588 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10265757323 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183571415004 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10265757323 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 14.1392134831 285% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 48.8420337079 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 12.1743820225 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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