All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
The prompt states that companies too often hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more effciently, rather, if companies spend little more time heeding to their own employees, then there would be no need to hire outside consultancy. In my Opinion, I truely agree with the prompt that companies should hire outside consultancies who would prove to be beneficial in the growth and operations of the company and not reply on their employees for suggestions
To begin with, the prompt is conveving that companies too often hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more effciently, rather, if companies spend little more time heeding to their own employees, then there would be no need to hire outside consultancy. For instance, the employees in any organization would be working for the sake of getting promotion, job perks and salary, they would not be having any real intention in the growth of the comapany, and if the organization bindly relies on them then it would backfire and this would result in the downfall of the company. in such situations it would be feasible to approach a reputed consultancy who would provide authentic suggestions to the comapanies in proliferating the growth of the comapny.
Alternatively, in few circumstances, if the suggestions of the consultancies proved to a disaster for the company and has resulted in poor performance, then it would be a great realization for the comapny that, if they had tried to listen to the suggestion of thier employees of the own organization and not any outsider, it would have received a plethora of valuable inputs from various employees which would have actually helped the company perform efficiently and this would build a good relationship between the employees and the organization.
To sum it all up, from the above instances, we can conclude that, companies should hire outside consultancies who would prove to be beneficial in the growth and operation of the company. Parallelly, companies should spend some time to heed to their employees who would actually provide a real-time insights about the overall functioning in the organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y on their employees for suggestions To begin with, the prompt is conveving t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... result in the downfall of the company. in such situations it would be feasible to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iferating the growth of the comapny. Alternatively, in few circumstances, if ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the employees and the organization. To sum it all up, from the above instanc...
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Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'insight'?
Suggestion: insight
... who would actually provide a real-time insights about the overall functioning in the or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, then, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16997167139 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01904863156 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419263456091 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.918896697 60.3974514979 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.714285714 118.986275619 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4285714286 23.4991977007 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.21951772744 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.613697368294 0.243740707755 252% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317480643842 0.0831039109588 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196051088359 0.0758088955206 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.422389248788 0.150359130593 281% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142336067993 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y on their employees for suggestions To begin with, the prompt is conveving t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... result in the downfall of the company. in such situations it would be feasible to...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iferating the growth of the comapny. Alternatively, in few circumstances, if ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the employees and the organization. To sum it all up, from the above instanc...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'insight'?
Suggestion: insight
... who would actually provide a real-time insights about the overall functioning in the or...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, then, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16997167139 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01904863156 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419263456091 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.918896697 60.3974514979 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.714285714 118.986275619 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4285714286 23.4991977007 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.21951772744 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.613697368294 0.243740707755 252% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317480643842 0.0831039109588 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196051088359 0.0758088955206 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.422389248788 0.150359130593 281% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142336067993 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.