All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Humans cannot find their own mistakes until they look at the given situation hard. Most of the time the mistakes we make are tiny and silly which can be oversaw unless, the situation has some serious gravity. "Companies do hire outside consult to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently", everybody is benefitted from this like company can get good returns and consult gets a hefty salary or reward .
During, 2007 economic collapse was beginning many people were warned of the collapse by Michael Bury who, is an investor but who, also sought to look after people for his caring nature. The collapse happened due to, Lehmann Brothers an investing firm were delivering "Government Issued
Bonds" on Iow price range. Althoug, this issuance of bonds to genral public was good oppurtunity to make money people started to buy all types of bonds from them some of which were faulty. Lehmann Brothers in cupidity issued numerous default bonds (these bonds were below C rank) once, all the bonds were issued Lehmann Brothers did make a great profit but little did they know that the IRS is looking for the those who issued faulty bonds and making share market more volatile. All the banks who had invested in bonds were called and questioned. Lehmann Brothers was found guilty for providing people faulty bonds which were of no value neither to the government and nor to the people. Federal Reserve took consult from big banks like "BlackRock" to reassess the problem and find out a way without making people lose all their money. Lehmann Brothers was doing all it can to operate more efficiently but the were doing it based on greed for money. So, hiring an outside consult was neccessary.
Harvey Spectre an incredible lawyer who had won more 100 cases was being charged for breaking attorney client privilege as per the New York Association Bar no one from his firm were able to represent him so, his company hired a consult from another firm. The consult "Anita Gibbs" was trying to help Harvey or maybe she was just trying to make it look in that way. Every attorney in New York was jealous and envious of Harvey so, was Anita she tried to make a deal between harvey and his prosecutor to drop the charges in against of Harvey waiving of his license to practise law. This advice was not just inappropriate but worthless, Harvey going away from firm would cost them dearly so, Jessica who is boss of harvey stepped in and made amendments to his deal stating
that Harvey would follow all ehtical practices and prosecutor will get retention cheque for 1 million dollars in return. The firm hiring outside consult was not just deemed unesccessary also waste of time for everybody.
Hiring outside consultants can be unneccessary and useless as we can see had Jessica not meddled in harvey might had lost his license to practice law but from example of Lehmann Brothers we can understand that a company who listens to their employees and consults from them might not always be a logical choice. As, all the company employees were greedy to fill their own pockets. So hiring outside consult was neccessary.
In conclusion we can say that hiring consultant depends wholly on situation we are in, gravity of situation and all other parameters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...pany hired a consult from another firm. The consult 'Anita Gibbs' was trying to h...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m might not always be a logical choice. As, all the company employees were greedy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2744.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 559.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90876565295 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59384082088 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499105545617 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 845.1 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1504300066 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.619047619 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308212570103 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107198159133 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933482267199 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164103098195 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104981451147 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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