Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leaders are made and not born. It is the inexhaustive list of skills that make a person a leader. Few qualities topping the chart are moral judgment, respect, and kind nature.
Decision making is a key role of a leader. It includes sound and moral judgment, keeping in mind everyone's interests. A leader should not be arrogant about his position or power. He should respect each and everyone without discrimination. That's what makes a fine leader. Take for example honorable PM of India, Mr. Narender Modi. His kind words and respect has helped him gain special attention. His moral and confident judgment related to demonetization has helped curb the flow of black money.
Meanwhile, it is important to maintain the respect of peers as a leader. At times there are can be difficult situations, where few judgments may tarnish the repute of the leader's peers. Taking the example of Adolf Hitler. His decisions against the jews not only disrespected the ideologies of jews but also resulted in questioning his abilities as a leader. This led to his downfall as what he thought was a moral judgment was disrespecting one of the communities.
A leader's role is unique and tricky. It requires perseverance and sound moral judgment. Along with this, he has to keep in mind the interest and respect of his peers. If he can do so, then he makes a fine leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ch and everyone without discrimination. Thats what makes a fine leader. Take for exam...
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Line 13, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...specting one of the communities. A leaders role is unique and tricky. It requires ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87124463519 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78570198886 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0454987476 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.75 118.986275619 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.65 23.4991977007 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261044968783 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835731716793 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518628678643 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168983237992 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025752374183 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.78 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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