In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
This topic raises controversial issue whether novice contribute significantly in any sector or veteran individuals are able to produce meritorious result. I firmly believe that beginner has a upper hand in order to produce propitious result. However, in some extent we cannot overlook the importance of experience people. Here, I would like to provide two scenarios where novices has a excellent abilities as compare to experience people.
First and foremost, begginer always galvanize towards their career and that lead towards beneficial result. For example, in early age youth have a great energy to do something new in the world. because they have to achieve fame and money. For example, at early age Sundar Pichhai contributed significant role for developing internet browser for google. Where other expert people were busy to do commonplace task. Therefore, in most case beginners are intelligent and they have a great energy to do acheive expected result.
Second, In high school mostly graduate students have intreset in research. Also, 21st century already witnessed about innovation in science and technology, where most innovation done by the fledglers. For example, In USA mostly research in machin learning are done by the students under the mentorship of professor. Since youth are excited towards technology, hence they are able to give auspicious results. Also, beginner has a more idea about new technology; they know how to use of technology. Hence, mostly companies higher begginner as compare to expert masses.
Admiteddly, we cannot undermine the contribution of veteran people. At urgency they have a knowledge how to handle particular situation and their expertise brings the organization from serious problems. In 2009 recession hit in USA; due to that most IT professional affected. But, in Microsoft no any employees faced tough situaion because of owner of the firm. Where bill gates contributed significant for his company in that time span using his past experience.
To conclude, in most cases begginers have a upper hand. However, at critical time mostly experience plays a pivotal role. Therefore, I believe that in any organization must have equal people experienced and novoice. Harmony of the both masses leads benefit results for company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sses leads benefit results for company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44662921348 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84121264059 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592696629213 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3832067801 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.56 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.24 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0681536388653 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188112712897 0.0831039109588 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180809617958 0.0758088955206 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379787054942 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135474929624 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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