In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. I

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... of expertise and the society in several respects. In some instances, imagination...
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...expertise and the society in several respects. In some instances, imagination plays a...
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...o matter how creative it is, the role of imagination cannot subvert that of exper...
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...tter how creative it is, the role of imagination cannot subvert that of experience. Addi...
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...ence. Additionally, both imagination and experience can make an equal contributio...
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.... Additionally, both imagination and experience can make an equal contribution to an ac...
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...ndrances to those who want to contribute to society. It may become hard to think ...
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...nces to those who want to contribute to society. It may become hard to think ou...
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... think out of the box with already fixed habits. This is especially true in the f...
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...nk out of the box with already fixed habits. This is especially true in the field o...
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...d design. In the late 1860s, as early as his twenties, Claude Monet rejected the ...
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...t style exhibited at the Salon de Paris, the greatest annual event at that time. ...
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...ra when outdoor painting was rare, Monet enjoyed painting outdoors and used revol...
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...hen outdoor painting was rare, Monet enjoyed painting outdoors and used revolutionar...
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...ry techniques. Monet's new style of painting attracted the public so quickly...
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...uccessful of starting his own exhibition along with a few like-minded artists. Th...
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...ssful of starting his own exhibition along with a few like-minded artists. This ne...
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...art movement is called impressionism. If Monet had adhered to the established pai...
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...ainting techniques at that time, no such innovative paintings would be handed dow...
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...ing techniques at that time, no such innovative paintings would be handed down to today...
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... situations where experience is of great necessity. Decisions just based on imagi...
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...uations where experience is of great necessity. Decisions just based on imagination mi...
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...ion might bring disastrous results. When America was suffering from a hideous inf...
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...nflation problem, President Jimmy Carter appointed Paul Volcker as Chairman of th...
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...tion problem, President Jimmy Carter appointed Paul Volcker as Chairman of the Federal...
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...an of the Federal Reserve Bank in 1979. As soon as Volcker took on the role, he...
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...Federal Reserve Bank in 1979. As soon as Volcker took on the role, he took severa...
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... such as letting the target federal fund rate to over 20% and unemployment to dou...
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...h as letting the target federal fund rate to over 20% and unemployment to double ...
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... 20% and unemployment to double digits. Although he faced a great amount of oppositio...
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...digits. Although he faced a great amount of opposition, Chairman Volcker was stea...
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...ts. Although he faced a great amount of opposition, Chairman Volcker was steadf...
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... with his policies. The American economy did suffer for another three years but m...
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...unway to substantial growth in the 1980s and 90s. It would not be possible for Pa...
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...y to substantial growth in the 1980s and 90s. It would not be possible for Paul ...
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...Paul Volcker, who had almost 30 years of experience in the financial industry, to...
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...d as the man who quelled inflation if he based his decision on imagination. In th...
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... the man who quelled inflation if he based his decision on imagination. In this re...
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...previous experience is crucial in making a great contributions. Moreover, th...
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...ious experience is crucial in making a great contributions. Moreover, the...
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...erience is crucial in making a great contributions. Moreover, there are cases where i...
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...on and experience create a synergy. They could complement each other in a way tha...
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...imagination based on experience leads to innovation in business fields. This is w...
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...ination based on experience leads to innovation in business fields. This is what is hap...
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...s is what is happening at Tesla Motors. Although Elon Musk, chairman of Tesla, had no...
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...happening at Tesla Motors. Although Elon Musk, chairman of Tesla, had no previous...
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... knowledge of automobiles, his vision of changing the fundamental infrastructure ...
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... led him to be the first to successfully launched and commercialized electrical c...
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... him to be the first to successfully launched and commercialized electrical cars. Fur...
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... cars. Furthermore, along the process of developing more efficient batteries for ...
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...ric cars, Musk and a group of scientists introduced home batteries for storing so...
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...cars, Musk and a group of scientists introduced home batteries for storing solar energy...
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...for electricity. Elon Musk's vision coupled with the expertise of a group of...
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...s has made a significant contribution to the daily usage of energy in people&apos...
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...icantly than experience in certain areas that place more importance in creativity...
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...tly than experience in certain areas that place more importance in creativity. Co...
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...ily, when it comes to specialized fields such as economic policies, novices can h...
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...ce and knowledge of a virtuoso may bring more remarkable achievements in business...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3056.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4964028777 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07219726674 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 930.6 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6676236428 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.379310345 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1724137931 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10344827586 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 42.0 4.97078651685 845% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 7.80617977528 769% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820814379976 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214224081929 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246600438308 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0191841838552 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251854087679 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 100.480337079 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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