In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In every field, people invent many new ideas and models. these ideas are discussed among the people of the field to make this innovation more reliable and better. The people suggest their perspective about the model and suggest their point of view that might be helpful. According to the issue, these suggestions might be suggested better by beginners than experts. I disagree that beginners can give better suggestions than an expert.
Firstly, issue would be true, if it was 200-300 years ago. At the time scientific inventions were at peak. Also science was an incipient field because humankind was yet to invent basic innovations and discoveries. Even gravity was a newly discovered phenomenon. but now, science is fully developed field. We have discovered most, if not all, basic rules of science. so, if people are beginner in science, they are less likely to give good suggestions. The experts who have worked for years, due to their experience, they can see complex science problem in all the angles and they will give a reliable suggestion.
For example, Newton was just a simple person sitting under an apple tree. He discovered the gravity by his observation of the apple falling off the tree. this types of observation lead him and many other beginners to discover laws of science. but today, story is different. The science is finding solutions of very problems such as quantum physics. if people have not worked with such a complex field for a long time, they are most likely to make unreliable suggestions. so in the field of science the beginners are less likely to give a reliable solution in current time period.
however, art field is different in this perspective. art is a field, where all that matter is creativity. experts of a field, who are working in the field for a long time, are mostly narrow-minded when it comes to think out of box. they are more likely to give suggestion based on their narrow perspective. where beginners are new to the field, they do not have strong perspective. these minds are able to think out of the box. Their minds are able to think out of the box, giving batter suggestions which are more creative.
therefore, in a field like science, where deep knowledge of the respective field is required, beginners are less likely to give a good suggestion due to lack of their knowledge of the field. however in field like painting and art the beginners, who do not have restricted minds, are able to invent new innovations and give better suggestions. therefore, it varies from field to field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89195402299 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64679875792 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455172413793 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5858868312 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9333333333 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147224408614 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424214412761 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382568707961 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899551467734 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223209958374 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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