Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In

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Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

A leader has a vision he wants to accomplish and the seeks the support of people to do so, not all people have the same vision and some even oppose his vision. So, true leaders should not be affected by every statement that is made against them or every comments he listens from people, opoosiition or media. The above statement is tells us this very idea that leaders shall not easily budge from their stands and I strongly adhere to the idealogy, the following reasons support my analogy on the topic presented.

Leaders need to present a mandate before the elections and the opinions of the masses are framed acoording to the manifestos and madates presented by these leaders. Based on these manifestos people judge who they are willing to elect and would serve for the development. If a leader later shifts from his ideals after being elected due to pressure from opposition and media it will create distrust among the majority and tarnish the reputation of the leader. For instance, A leader may preach about banning alcohol from his state in his mandate and the majority supported him in his endevaour and he gets elected and later due to castigation from media and opposition,it may prevent him from doing so as the alcohol sales in the state are a major source of taxtation as the state is famous for it wines and breweries. This shows how the leader changes his opinion due to little critisicm.

A fickle minded person can never be a true leader, he may be influenced by everything he hears and reads. Doing so will make it impossible to take decisions in his own accord. For example, if ia fickle minded ruler like Allaudhin Tuglaq is elected he may not be able to take decision, as Tuglaq changed his capital twice during his rule shifiting all his assests over long distances and then coming back to his orignal capital and being confounded about every decision he every took. He moved his capital only as people said the new capital will be more beautiful than the previous one. History is evidence that no fickle minded leader has ever been sucessful as they can't have a crystal clear judgement.

Shifts in popular opinions can curb the masses but should not affect the leader or ruler. Doing this will only make him look weak in the eyes of the public and torment his stature in the society. This will lead to the downfall of his whole hegemony. Some people may argue that leader should listen to the popular opinion once in while to see hwat the poeple really want, but this can then become a problem as he may listen to the opinion and it may not be lawfully correct to ensue it or it may start as wave where the poeple demand him to listen to them everytime making the functioning sluggish. The above points show how I support the given arguement and conclude that leaders should not be influenced by popular opiniond and work on their own accord in publice welfare.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...popular opinion might not be suitable, To begin, a politician should not render...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s what people wanted and instead he/she have to decide the priority of things. There...
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...try tat has to be parallely monitored. Secondly, if a leader can shift to the t...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ollowing to solve the issues that have a high demand might waste a lot of time, e...
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... the need and the want for the people. Thirdly, simply following the public pop...
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Suggestion: decided
...isrupt the planning that government has decide to follow for the next five years. Let ...
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Line 7, column 472, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
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Suggestion: has
...ight not chose him next time because he have not fulfilled his promised. On the ...
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...se he have not fulfilled his promised. On the other hand, it is the duty of the...
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...rroundings, but it the duty of the mayor and his fellow constituents to look into...
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... constituents to look into this issue. In summary, people might have different ...
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Line 11, column 256, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
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Suggestion: .
...wisely choose despite of peoples opinion.. A government should choose to run for p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2822.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86551724138 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53144316911 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43275862069 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 884.7 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.423065261 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137419996089 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046131042177 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872158415157 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830385721358 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695490267014 0.0667264976115 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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