In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There are several situation where discussion among people having different view has lead to a positive outcome that has ultimately lead to progress. People having a contrasting point of view often emphasize on their opinion by citing different examples which often tends to cite different aspects of a situation leading to progress.
Different people may have different opinion on a particular topic. Usually this opinion is a matter of ones perspective on that particular situation and sometimes it originates from ones experience in a particular situation. Nevertheless their point of view matters as it helps to understand several aspects of a situation which in turn helps to judge the situation from several aspects. Demonetisation in India had some good consequences and some negative ones. But while judging this situation our opinion should not be limited to only our own point of view, instead its effect on the majority of the country’s population should be taken into account. This can be analysed properly when we know the different views people have on the effect of demonetisation.
Progress requires discussion among intellectuals who have different view on a particular situation and analyzing the reason for their opinion. People usually tend to think that a military effort by the superpowers of the world will lead to end of dictatorship in North Korea. But people do not take into account the fact that people in North Korea are under dictatorship for decades and have no idea about the advancement that has occurred all around the world over these decades. A military action may lead to a destabilized country causing a civil war in that region. A discussion among individuals having different opinion on this situation will help to understand the different aspect of this situation which will help to find a possible solution to this situation.
When World War II broke out many people in Britain had different opinion on Churchill’s decision to join hands with Stalin who was the leader of a communist nation. But at the end the allied forces were the one who won the war. It is not possible to judge a situation even large number of people have similar view on a situation. We need to judge the situation from the point of view of different people who have different opinion on the topic.
Although sometimes a discussion among people having different opinion on a situation may lead to a mess but most of the time it results in progress. Hence in any situation discussion among people having different view on the situation leads to progress.
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- In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several situations
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Suggestion: situations
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Suggestion: leaded; led
... a positive outcome that has ultimately lead to progress. People having a contrastin...
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Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06088992974 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88323213583 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0590135602 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.736842105 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214119121778 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861246553639 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683716193161 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153894459288 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448464060674 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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