In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Some people claim that the goal of politics should be the pursuit of an ideal. Others argue that the goal should be finding common ground and reaching reasonable consensus.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
politics is a complex area of study. The word politics refer to anything that is related to political parties, government and their activities. some people believe that politician aim for the idealism, while on the other hand, some says that one should seek common grounds that are acceptable to all parties. I believe that looking for common ground is more reasonable since it deals with all the side without creating resentment among any group. Moreover, ideality is not always achievable. however, in some circumstance seeking idealism helps us to improve ourselves.
To begin with, ideality is a subjective term. therefore, what is ideal for one is could be different or even opposite from the ideal of others. For example, weather there some should be same education system across the country or not has always been the topic of debate amongst people. some believe that the having the same system will promote unity and level of understanding in students. while on the other hand, some says that having more than one system allows for diversity amongst students and give varieties to student in term of which education system to follow. this example shows that the ideal situation vary from person to person and what one might feel ideal might not be same for other.
Furthermore, idealism will not always achievable. For example, to fight the growing threat of environmental concern and global warming, an ideal situation would be to shut down all the coal based power plants. however, this could result in power shortages and loss of jobs for many. Instead, a government should seek reasonable ground by reducing the amount of electricity generated through coal power plant gradually while increasing the generation through clean technology. although, this gradual shift will not immediately lessen carbon footprints, but it will prevent us from facing any power shortages and jobs lost. therefore, implementing ideal measure can sometime bring negative outcome, and therefore government should seek common ground.
however, in some circumstances seeking ideal situation can help us to improve. For instance, an ideal scenario for a traffic police department would be zero traffic accidents on roads. although, this might feel impossible, pursuing such a goal will keep the department to continuously improve their performance. In order to reduce accident on the road to zero, traffic police department would become more strict in enforcing traffic rules and fining people for traffic violation unless the traffic situation become ideal. this example shows that how in some situation the pursuit of idealism can help us to improve further and further until that ideality is achieve. therefore, in some circumstance seeking idealism helps us in beneficial ways.
In summary, politician should seek reasonable consequences in most cases since ideality differ from person to person; also ideality is not always achievable. however, in some cases idealism help us to improve ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in summary, in most cases, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36152219873 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66974078865 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475687103594 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4755153338 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1923076923 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186989609515 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545632021366 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316536047378 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109690346668 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285786537792 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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