The table below gives information about UK independent films.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
IELTS Writing Task 1
The table illustrate the number of films released in different genre and the income they generated from ticket sales in UK and the Republic of Ireland for the year 2012.
It is clear from the table that table that although most of the films were produced in the Drama and Documentary category, they were not the most financially successful one; while on the surprising note, the greatest ticket sales came from comedy genre which produced far less films. Another notable feature of the information present in the table is that out of all genres Biopic was the most successful category having the highest income per number of films released.
Looking at the table we can see that Documentary and Drama were the most prolific category with 35 films released followed by comedy films that contributed a total of 26 films to the film industry. However, on the financial side despite having myriad of films made Documentary and Drama gather only 12% of the total ticket sales combined. By contrast, most of the revenue in ticket sales came from comedy films which gathered an impressive proportion of 45.4% of all the income from tickets.
Talking about other genres, although Horror and Thriller produced similar number of films 14 and 13, respectively, Horror earned significantly more than Thriller category accounting for just over a one-fifth of the total sales while Thriller made only 1.3% of total earnings. Other categories made fewer than 10 films nor were they able to make any substantial amount of income. However, Biopic is an exception having made only one film it was the most profitable category making nearly one-tenth of the total sales.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The table illustrate the number of films released in differe...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'table that'.
Suggestion: table that
...he year 2012. It is clear from the table that table that although most of the films were produce...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun films is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...me from comedy genre which produced far less films. Another notable feature of the i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05072463768 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50276836851 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0627587238 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.888888889 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559835241447 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279720153575 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210934240491 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408322811494 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201192217806 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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