Argument is an unavoidable task that everyone needs to experience in dealing with people. Many different types of situations can test the argument’s ability in different ways. I personally agree with the statement which claims that the best test of an argument is to convince someone with an opposing view point for many reasons.
First, to convince someone with an opposing viewpoint, we need to understand their points of views and find the reason why their views are wrong. For example, when we want to convince someone to go to bed before midnights, it is not enough to tell them the benefits of going to bed early. Those people always have some reasons that make them ignore those benefits. Some people may have a lot of work to finish each day. Some of them may need to take care of their family members. Therefore, the person who want to convince these people to go to bed earlier needs to describe them why it is more important to go to bed before midnight than to do other tasks. We may tell them that if they want to work efficiently, they need to sleep long enough to have a fresh body and mind that can generate new brilliant ideas. We may also tell them that if they do not sleep enough and get sick, who will take care of their family members. These arguments are obviously more difficult than telling them only the pros of going to bed early.
Some may argue that convincing people that do not have opposing viewpoint is also difficult. This may be true. Convincing people to eat vegetable may be difficult if they do not usually eat them. However, if they do not have opposing viewpoint such as the belief that eating vegetable can damage their health, it is not too difficult to convince them. We can only tell them the benefits they will get from eating vegetable such as improving the digestion system and less chance of the illness. Then, when those people realize these benefits they will certainly try to eat more vegetable because they have not had any opposite view before. Therefore, the ability to convince people to agree with the new viewpoints they have no idea before is not as much challenging as the ability to convince people to change from their opposing view point to a new one.
All in all, I think that if we want to test the ability of argument, we need to test it in the most difficult situations which are the situations that people has opposing points of views.
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- Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.Reason: We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to 50
- Some people believe that the purpose of education is to free the mind and the spirit. Others believe that formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely alig 57
- Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In 48
- People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...s to experience in dealing with people. Many different types of situations can test the argume...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...pros of going to bed early. Some may argue that convincing people that do not have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at people has opposing points of views.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.181236673774 0.240241500013 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.206823027719 0.157235817809 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0746268656716 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0639658848614 0.0497285424764 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0810234541578 0.0444667217837 182% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0980810234542 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0341151385928 0.0406280797675 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3969759308 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0682302771855 0.030933414821 221% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0852878464819 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298507462687 0.0249443105267 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255863539446 0.0148568991511 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2420.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 432.0 452.878318584 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60185185185 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289351851852 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199074074074 0.280924506359 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159722222222 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0925925925926 0.132149295362 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3969759308 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398148148148 0.48968727796 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.9503473779 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2041410859 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 41.5074074074 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 0.890909090909 1.64882698954 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379758256367 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.169250386174 0.123202303941 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0818941411969 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519947989472 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192379720637 0.149214159877 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150621274423 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13105791393 0.0892212321368 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33886633972 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123575471214 0.0692045440612 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321463448187 0.275328986314 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110467094675 0.0653680567796 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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