Each person has his or her own belief and this belief is always different from person to person. When I learn new beliefs from people, I usually compromise their beliefs with my personal belief. I think that there is no belief that is one hundred percent correct, so we should not adhere to a specific one.
Each belief has its own reasons that may be true in some circumstances and may be invalid in the others. For example, one of my friends believes that we should do the exercise in the morning because our bodies are fully energized from long sleep and we can expose to the fresh air in the morning. Some people may choose to adhere to this belief and follow it strictly. However, the morning exercise can make us feel tried for the rest of the day. For this reason, we may not be able to work effectively for a whole day. Therefore, it is better to compromise this belief by switching between morning and evening exercise. If we do not have many activities on that day, we may exercise in the morning. We can also choose to exercise in the evening for the busy day, so that we can complete our day work without feeling tired.
Some may argue that we should adhere to a specific belief because it is harmful to deviate that belief. For instance, there is a belief that we should sleep at least seven hour per day. The person who adheres to that belief may dismiss all their tasks when it is their sleeping time because they do not want to destruct their health. This action is not always right and it can lead to one’s failure. This person may fail to complete their important tasks such as the important meeting preparation and the financial report review. These incomplete tasks will cause him or her to have a bad work performance and get fired. How can a person keep their health fit if he or she is unemployed and does not have money to buy good food? The world famous people such as Isaac Newton and Albert Einstein sleep less than six hours a day but they could still be healthy and had long life spans. This can prove that it is not proper to adhere to a specific belief.
All in all, I personally think that we should compromise to one’s own beliefs and choose to follow them only in proper circumstance in order to get most advantages from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...work without feeling tired. Some may argue that we should adhere to a specific bel...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...ief that we should sleep at least seven hour per day. The person who adheres to that...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...order to get most advantages from them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.189956331878 0.240241500013 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.155021834061 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0829694323144 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0458515283843 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0938864628821 0.0444667217837 211% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0982532751092 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0131004366812 0.0406280797675 32% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.30469604938 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0458515283843 0.030933414821 148% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0960698689956 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0480349344978 0.0249443105267 193% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0109170305677 0.0148568991511 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2283.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 419.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44868735084 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300715990453 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190930787589 0.280924506359 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.107398568019 0.200843997647 53% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0596658711217 0.132149295362 45% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.30469604938 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470167064439 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.2669257228 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9523809524 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3072680139 59.4972553346 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.674092028746 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 39.0454597113 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.02222222222 1.64882698954 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372824090793 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092601818481 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0727931224289 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487647233442 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16418042647 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147360996979 0.161403998019 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622457807066 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2779348293 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102555993344 0.0692045440612 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265277138613 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569540379653 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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