The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The feeling of Competitiveness is an important feeling to be in someone. who aspires to be someone great in any kind of field. The Competitive nature brings out the potential of someone but at the same time can sometimes lead on to having a negative impact also. On the other side Cooperation which is a less used term, has a great importance which sometimes gets ignored. I agree that a sense of cooperation in the younger generation would prove out to be a more fruitful thing because of reasons mentioned below.
To begin, Cooperation is a very important quality when it comes to professional jobs such as in a government job or any industrial job. Lets take the role of cooperation in political field. Cooperation of people leads to a better team work which is an essential part of any government body. Whereas on the other side having a competitive nature might turn out to be not that awarding as it would be sometimes No doubt, that competitiveness brings out the full potential of ourself but it also can lead to negative impacts at times. History is a proof of this thing, many political leaders have faced downfall and criticism for their over-competitive nature which lead them to either take a very harsh step or at the least loosing everything they had. But history also tells us that with cooperation and team work political parties have been sucessful and some still are because showing that cooperation with in the body shows a positive sign to the public which in-turn becomes a very positive thing for them. The above scenarios tells us that cooperation is better than competition if you cant control it.
Many fields require to have that team-work spirit in an individual which comes down from the cooperative nature. So i would like to conclude by saying that cooperation and team work can never lead to any negative impact on us but competitive nature might lead to some bad things
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
... an important feeling to be in someone. who aspires to be someone great in any kind...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... an important feeling to be in someone. who aspires to be someone great in any kind...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...mes lead on to having a negative impact also. On the other side Cooperation which is...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...a government job or any industrial job. Lets take the role of cooperation in politic...
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Line 3, column 1031, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'tell'.
Suggestion: tell
...ive thing for them. The above scenarios tells us that cooperation is better than comp...
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Line 3, column 1091, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ation is better than competition if you cant control it. Many fields require to h...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...es down from the cooperative nature. So i would like to conclude by saying that c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76737160121 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79467134594 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8753626192 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210905258692 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782280661138 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425130132546 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13916908682 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529505339104 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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