The best way for a society to prepare it's young generation for leadership in government, industry and other fields is by driving them in sense of cooperation with others but not by competiting with others. I strongly agree to this statement, even though the world is very competitive and one needs to out-run others to succeed, but for the proper functioning of society, one needs to cooperate with others as this world is inter-dependent on each other.
In a government, there are many sectors and departments, and a lot of coordination is required betweens these for adminstration of the government. For example, if government proposes to construct a bridge, at first the leader of the government need to interact with the civil department to finalize plans, and finance department for planning and disbursment of funds, and muncipal corporations for necessary approvals and permissions. In order to deal with these many people, a leader of a government should have a sense of cooperation rather than competition.
Since the world is revolutionized with the latest technologies, many industries emerge everyday. In each industry, many competitors arise and there will be a sense of competition among each other. Even though these competition is required in order to obtain right price levels and quality of prodcuts, a sense of cooperation among competitors is required to address societal problems collectively and provide long-term and innovative solutions. For example, consider Rail industry in Europe, different countries were dominated by different companies such as France by Alstom, Germany by Siemens and Italy by Thales. Each had its own standards and practices which made inter-country travel very difficult. But, an association formed by these companies and standardized the Rail technology, as a result rail travel between countries became seemless. This shows how cooperation in industry enhance way of living by developing technologies together over competiting with each other.
Almost in every field, cooperation is ver much required for a leader and as well as others. In Cricket, there were many instances where senior players of one team gave advices to junior players of other's team. This helps in overall development of game and also shows sportsman-ship of players. Though sports is a competitive industry, competition should be restricted only to the ground and outside one should help others in enhancing their skills.
Lastly, I would conclude by stating theventhough competition pushes a person or organization to grow individually, but cooperation aids in collective growth of society.
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- the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...st technologies, many industries emerge everyday. In each industry, many competitors ari...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this competition' or 'these competitions'?
Suggestion: this competition; these competitions
...mpetition among each other. Even though these competition is required in order to obtain right pr...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely and provide long-term and innovative solutions. For example, consider Rail in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45588235294 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16463238246 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526960784314 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8761120058 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.941176471 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383979243429 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110890585845 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14172890038 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195913666219 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133796223336 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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