The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In fields like government,industry or any other company if they go by the cooperation than works will divided by them and make them easy to work by helping each other but in competition gives you the best quality for your field work and best way to solver the problems.So there are pros and cons in both cooperation and competition,so society needs to identify the pros in both way.
cooperation can lead to socialism and burden will divided equally among them.It is best for the people to work efficient in different fields a with less effort.cooperation brings less work and more products like building home if you are professional in some fields than others can get help from you and more complex work can be done by collaborate with others.
competition is different from cooperation it brings best from you and high quality work from you.Competiton push you to your limits or out of your limits that can make you more skillfull.We can take example like there are many students who are designing train for the transport in this competition brings best design that will help train to go fast in less fuel and cover more distant.
both cooperation and competition is best for the fields and will bring best quality out from the peoples.both ways will help them to make less effort and more efficient projects for the world.cooperation and competition are different in them so society should help them to learn about collaborate and gives your best by competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , industry
In fields like government,industry or any other company if they go by the ...
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Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ping each other but in competition gives you the best quality for your field work...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ork and best way to solver the problems.So there are pros and cons in both coopera...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...cons in both cooperation and competition,so society needs to identify the pros in b...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cooperation
... identify the pros in both way. cooperation can lead to socialism and burden will d...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'divide'
Suggestion: divide
...n can lead to socialism and burden will divided equally among them.It is best for the p...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: It
... burden will divided equally among them.It is best for the people to work efficien...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Competition
...one by collaborate with others. competition is different from cooperation it brings...
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Line 13, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Competiton
...from you and high quality work from you.Competiton push you to your limits or out of your ...
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Suggestion: We
...limits that can make you more skillfull.We can take example like there are many st...
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Line 13, column 299, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'brings the best'.
Suggestion: brings the best
...n for the transport in this competition brings best design that will help train to go fast ...
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Line 13, column 339, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...brings best design that will help train to go fast in less fuel and cover more distan...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...l and cover more distant. both cooperation and competition is best for...
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Line 23, column 66, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bring the best'.
Suggestion: bring the best
...etition is best for the fields and will bring best quality out from the peoples.both ways ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.984 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97154774486 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 23.0359550562 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.4359511102 60.3974514979 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 311.5 118.986275619 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.5 23.4991977007 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232118472283 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170593929931 0.0831039109588 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826279131151 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170593929931 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826279131151 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.3 14.1392134831 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.01 48.8420337079 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 12.1743820225 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 100.480337079 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 11.2143820225 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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