The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Any democracy requires the consensus of the majority of the citizens of the country. In order to achieve a unanimous decision for the well fare of the nation, a true leader requires to work along with its team, being considerate about their views and ideas of the members, and not competing with them or trying to establish one's hegemony. The leader needs to portray an array of skills that makes him/ her the best candidate for the job. Henceforth, certain values and beliefs need to instil from a very young age to prepare the person to be great responsible leader in the future.
To be a great leader, one needs the cooperation of her team, she cannot tread the path alone. If the leader is working alone, without the cooperation of the team, well she won't be called a leader in the first place because she is not leading anyone and secondly, she is alone mainly because the ideas of the team doesn't match with that of her own ideas, as she is constantly trying to true herself to be superior then the rest and working for personal motives. To be a true leader, one needs to leave aside one's own personal goals to a secondary level, giving the goal of the team or the nation she is leading her priority.
Cooperation is a skill one needs in every domain of one's life. For example, organizing an event requires the help and working together of an entire team to set up a grant event. Such a skill may not be developed in a person overnight. Consequently, these skills that make a good leader needs to develop from a very young age, by organizing various events and competitions at school level.
Well, now the issue arises does a competitive spirit hinder the significance of cooperation in a person? How does a person stand out from the crowd? How would be establish himself as the best, without the competitive spirit? If he tries to be cooperative to the needs and demands of others and let his friend win, just because he is being cooperative, and setting his competitive spirit at stake. This obviously not the right thing to do. Hence, one needs to be competitive while participating in events and competition, but one needs to be cognizant when the competitive spirit starts to take oevr other situations, where competition isn’t required, but requires the working together to achieve the same goal. These values need to rightly instilled in the younger generation at the right age by their parents and teachers.
In a nutshell, cooperation is the most important skill required in a leader that needs to be inculcated at a very early age to shape future leaders. Additionally, developing competitive spirit so that they bring out the best in them and showcase it to the world. But the guardians also put a check on their competitive spirit that it doesn't interfere with their team spirit. Kids with their impressionable minds can grasp the right knowledge in the best manner and turn out to be great leaders for a brighter future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222807017544 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.154385964912 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0842105263158 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473684210526 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0491228070175 0.0444667217837 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10701754386 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.040350877193 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66217616141 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0473684210526 0.030933414821 153% => OK
Particles: 0.00877192982456 0.0016655270985 527% => OK
Determiners: 0.128070175439 0.0997080785238 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00701754385965 0.0249443105267 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0122807017544 0.0148568991511 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2954.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 518.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7027027027 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314671814672 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214285714286 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146718146718 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66217616141 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465250965251 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.1146356404 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5454545455 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1356136461 59.4972553346 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.674092028746 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 44.974025974 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.47552447552 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318464897378 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136957808075 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107804175405 0.077325440228 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56634338537 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152183172085 0.149214159877 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131207980932 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539705583142 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.414621371574 0.385218514788 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.136111053164 0.0692045440612 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225022245018 0.275328986314 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358161129371 0.0653680567796 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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