The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
young people are the future of the society and the nation. therefore the society should prepare the leadership among young minds to the government, industry and other fields. As this argument claims when preparing the youngers for the leadership, society should give the sense of corporation other than competition. For bolster my claim three factors can be analyzed and compared.
First of all, the word corporation means people should have ability to work with all the peoples in the society in well behaved manner. when making leaders to the government, those leaders should have ability to work with all the parties in the country as well as they have to concern about general public matters. industry scenario also the same. In industries managers and directors should have ability to get the best from their labours. And also when leading in a industry, those industries cannot maintain without corporation from other parties such as government and other industries. therefore the leader in the business should always have ability to work with all the parties in unbiased manner.
Furthermore, if the society make leaders with sense of competition it will be huge problem in many cases. can we work with other peer parities with the sense of competition? In my opinion, if we always think about the competition we always try to surpass them, we cannot work together in these cases. if we think about the governmenet leaders with competitive sense that would be result in under development of country. In these cases government leaders would not think about the well being of the society. they think about how to supplant other parties. this may result in government try to solve current problems without thinking the possible results happen in future. Though the solution for the problems may cause to win general public votes those soulution may be larger problems in future.
Although, some may argue that the sense of competition also need for leaders. if the leaders are not competitive the indutries are not going to develop into a futher stages. Yes, that claim may be true. but if they always try to be competitive that will lead to the unneccessary problems. leaders are the people who take decisions and those decision would be impartial. if decisions made with only competitive mind this will be not happen. therefore, society should make leaders with the sense of cooperation otherthan making them with competitive sense.
As a conclusion, the leaders always should more cooperative than other parties to develop a country or a industry. they may want sense of competiotion to develop their businesses than others, however with they should be less competitive and more cooperative as the ones who leads others for the well being of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in general, such as, as well as, first of all, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61110087881 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414473684211 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4557710364 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191989622673 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619599165672 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714290272334 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138049278715 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115784362383 0.0667264976115 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.