In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend by the prodigies discussing the pros and cons of tourism in developing countries. Some people believe that tourism in developing countries entails numerous advantages, while others maintain that tourism has ample of side effects on third world countries. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in under-developed countries.
Firstly, there are ample of benefits that tourism brings in under developed countries. The most conspicuous is that tourism boosts the economy of the country and also opens new profitable ventures for the locals. For instance, local businesses like hotels and resturants will be highly benefitted with the increased influx of tourists. Not only foriegn exchequer and local business is accelarated but also more job ventures are created for the local population. As a matter of fact, the advantages of tourism are quite evident on under developing countries.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of tourism cannot be sidelined. To begin with, flow of tourists would multiply the requirement of basic commodities and augment the financial burden on the government. Therefore, governments will be required to go beyond their financial capacity to meet the demand of tourists and their citizens. As an example, governments will have to make all out efforts to provide basic necessities like health, filtered water, electricity and communication means at all tourists spots and locations. As a result, tourism might cause in enhancement of financial burden on local government.
To recapitulate, tourism entails both pros and cons, however boosting of economy and influx of foriegn exchange by tourism outwieghs its disadvantages which can be subsequently met my the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...have to make all out efforts to provide basic necessities like health, filtered water, electricit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53260869565 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04008394226 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6385196742 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429431792857 0.242375264174 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165711997668 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171534617993 0.071462118173 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258064631597 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174171858325 0.0609392437508 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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